Would you please have a look at my website which i am creating. Gimme some feedback it would be alot helpfull.
http://www.geocities.com/renegadesstuff/index.html?1028817783520

Peace Renegade,

i hate micheal jackson

So do i its the most fucked up picture i have of him. I mean look at his sweater.

Peace Renegade,

um, there's nothing there to give feedback TO!

I think you're web page is supposed to have some real content before you ask our opinions on it...

Ads.

here's a link for all you folks that clicked this thread title and left the table feeling less than satiated.
http://www.amvc.com

bon apetit!

Fuck sake i am a let down.

Oh well,

Peace Renegade,

um, use a spellchecker

Renegade,

Your website looks to be off for a great start! I am confident that with some color and context added in to your website, totse communities will be complketely amazed and blown away by your adept abilities as a webmaster.

-Ironz

Thanks IRONZ that was good to hear. Bookmark my site and keep checking.

Peace Renegade,

[QUOTE]Originally posted by Renegade:
its the most fucked up picture i have of him.


You mean.... You have more than ONE picture of Michael Jackson? One is too many.

no shit, one michal jackson is too many, and i'm not talking photos.

Renegade,

I have bookmarked your site. If you want, I can give you a few tips for creating a more lively website. E-mail me. king_kahn@hotmail.com

Dude, renegade, you see that key in the middle left side of the keyboard called 'Caps Lock'? You may not see it at first, you might have to scrape the encrusted semen off the keyboard first, but yeah, press that button once and never touch it again, cause all your fucking subjects on your posts are all caps.

Click my tag to take a look at my homepage.

VIPER

It's good to hear some supportive words from somebody at TOTSE. Good job, IRONZ.
But I do have to agree with the consensus, Renegade, your site lacks content. I'll be glad to take a look again when you update.

Hehe, thank you very much Phantom. I know how it feels from experience to have something you are proud of shot down by others.

[This message has been edited by Ironz (edited 08-11-2002).]

Sorry about the caps lock posts. I dont usually do that and even i noticed that.

Thanks to Phantom and Ironz,

Peace Reneagade,

Damn, both Viper's and Renegade's sites were wastes of time.

On another note. I went to the Totse Loser List site and I have to say that I am astonished that Zok is number one on that list. Now, I don't really know him, but from what I know he is definitely not loser-esque. Have you seen his room? It's mad leet... yo...

*smacks whoever voted for Zok*

And don't worry, Zok, I won't tell anyone you killed someone.

Site's looking good Renegade. Maybe if there was something to see it would be better. Just a suggestion.