i call it:

Destiny of a Triangle

once upon a time their was an enchanted magical mystery reality called the triangle zone. it was two dimensional. its inhabitants consisted of two triangles. palisquale and jobab were their names. palisquale and jobab were secret lovers. palisquale was an equilateral triangle while jobab was a scalene triangles. if you know anything about triangles then you know why they had to keep their love a secret. im not going to explain it to anyone but a retard. do we have any retards in the audience today? no?? oh ok then, anyway...

now i know i said that palisquale and jobab were the only inhabitants of this triangle zone... but what i didnt tell you about was their secret selves.

theyre secret selves were lets say shadow people. they existed, but not in the triangle zone. they existed in the reverse triangle zone. but their were many inhabitants in the reverse triangle zone. including bears. but they were still two dimensional. and they were made of triangles. and their was no color.

now, triangle world and reverse triangle world could communicate but only through a "window" they called the hole of destiny. but that was the triangle language.

when hole of destiny is translated into english it literally means vagina.
but that has nothing to do with anything. its just a coincidence.

the reverse triangle zone, according to the triangle zone, was evil. and the triangle zone, according to the reverse triangle zone, was evil.

another thing thats not that important is that the reverse triangle zone called the triangle zone the reverse triangle zone and referred to their own zone as the triangle zone.

ill never know why.

now back to palisquale and jobab...
why did they have to keep theyre love a secret?
because the reverse triangle zone could only enter the triangle zone by confirming with out a doubt that the triangles in the triangle zone were exhibiting emotions.

now as any retard would have you know, triangles cant talk.
have you ever seen a triangle talk? hell no you havnt.

but these triangles are different than most triangles. these triangles can move and fly sometimes and see and manipulate their surroundings. thier was only one place that the reverse triangle world couldnt see them, and that was behind a rectangle. they only had one rectangle. but they had a lot of lines. they could move the lines and the rectangle. the only line they could not move was the ground line.

another thing you should probably know is that they are chained to anchors. palisquale and jobab are. the anchors keep them from floating off.









thats it so far

inspired by kurt vonnegut

I lol'd

However, this sub-forum is for discussing written material.
The place you should post your own literary creative expressions is the sub-forum below this one.
Vogon Poetry

I suppose you could make a thread discussing a book you posted in Vogon, but that just seems unnecessary to me.

thank you for not being a dick. i feel very enchanted right now. if you worked at a restaurant and i was rich as fuck i would give you a million dollar tip.

I stopped reading there (or should I say they're?)

your so cool. and enchanted.

i feel that their is a light shining upon us.

and that this is the internet and im not going to use proper grammar ever emvkvlkckd

Well, basic grammar isn't that hard, and I don't think 'the internet' should be any exception. It just shows how much effort you put it, and if you can't comply with basic grammar then how can you compose a good narrative?

I can't follow most of it. There's a lack of transitions, related thoughts, or any type of structure or driving-force. The story just kind of meanders along back and forth without really going anywhere.

its a rough draft for the intro

vurry ruf