If anybody reading this knows a thing or two about what good electronic music sounds like, I'd appreciate it if you could listen to the song I made and either post there or here what you thought of it. I put quite a bit of time into it and I would like some honest unbiased opinions.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e7XBkoBtXWM

Moving to ...and Rock and Roll.

Just like everyone else who tries to make electronic music, it sucks.

For some reason people think that since electro doesn't require any instrument playing (although most professionals do) and just computer mouse clicking that anyone can do it. This is not the case at all, you still do have to be musically talented to make anything good.

it sounds pretty generic to me.

Talent + tons of expensive equipment

Also, a lot of producers say it has more to do with mastering the technology more than musical talent, but I'm sure talent helps.

it sounds very shallow, feed a 4 beat thunder bass and add some Saw synths and you'll sound like tiesto

I agree he is overrated.

autechre, venetian snares, atrium carceri

it was okay until the voice came in
i stopped listening after that

I should say though that it is better then most other amateur electro stuff posted here.