I hope you enjoy being raped
for after I'm done your anus will sure be gaped

I hope you enjoy crying
as my cock is past your cervix proceeding

I hope you enjoy begging me to stop
only to hear your own cherry pop

I hope you enjoy guys
who violently ejaculate into your eyes

I hope you're not too tight
for then I shall surely bite

I hope you enjoy you don't bleed too much
when I fuck you with a broken crutch

I hope you enjoy the having electric currents
running through your pussy leaving pubes burnt

I hope you know that I will surely not rest
till lactating are your breats
for if you try to resist
then your throat shall be slit

um....... ooooooookkkkkkkaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyy??

Exotic, to say the least. +1

You haven't even taken a decent prose and changed the lyrics or anything, there's no consistency, you haven't even counted syllables, the rhyming is lazy and uninventive (if you're going to rhyme, do it well)... just not very good. For what you're trying to do, that's really not very good. Hard to be funny/shocking when it's just shit.

I raped you last night. Wern't you aware?
I left dried semen all in your hair.
I made sweet love to your pussy.
I even penetrated your tushi.
I caused your rectum great pain.
And many a time I screamed out your name.
I left a pool of urine on your chest.
I even laid feces on one breast.
I hit you in the face from time to time.
Your were my bitch. You were all mine.
Well if you wern't aware.
Then I could not care.
But my penis has begun to hurt.
Because of the S.T.D's you did insert.

Threataning another poster with actual physical harm now?


Oh dear. :(
Ketch, Psycho, feel free to reverse this infraction if you feel it is unjustified.