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 #1 
Old 2007-08-28, 08:40
ajardoor ajardoor is offline
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Default Help with an erotica plot

Currently, I'm trying to construct a plot for an erotic story (read: I thought a short story could be spiced up with a brazen sex scene).

Currently, I've set up the basic premise: guy is a high school student (final year, of course), girl is as well, they get put together on the same group project and somehow end up in bed.

Problem is, I can't think of the right 'catalyst' for the sex and I really want to develop the plot to make it fairly believable.

Anyone care to help me out?
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Old 2007-08-28, 08:43
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Doing a project? say they were doing a project for anatomy. and they had a few beers, I drank as a senior. and somebody make the joke, id like to examine your anatomy!

But, thats just a thought, im sure others can build on and criticize it
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Old 2007-08-28, 08:59
Caramello Koala Caramello Koala is offline
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maybe write a couple of scenes where she comes over to his house to do the assignment, and its hinted that they are going to have sex but never do. build the tension then make them have sex in a totally unrelated way, eg. they go to a party and they just cant control it anymore and she grabs him by the hand and pushes him towards a wall or something. or they win a trip somewhere for the assignment, like its a science thing in some school competition, and they end up fucking in the plane toilet. i dunno, use your imagination.
you shouldn't be asking us.
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Old 2007-08-28, 09:00
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"Oh, you dropped something, I'll pick it up for you" is a bit clichéd, but still, it'll give you a lead in.
Sorry to go a bit off topic, but does anyone here remember that erotica story someone on here made and got other members to record themself reading a line? You should probably do that, you know, shits and giggles.
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Old 2007-08-28, 09:04
Suicide_Mouse Suicide_Mouse is offline
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It would be cool if they were doing a science project about space and they were out in his backyard drinking and taking pictures of the sky.

You could right about the lighting from the house casting shadows across her soft figure laying on the cool grass.

I don't know, why are you asking us? If you write then you must be creative... so what going on here? Massive writers block? how is that possible with a story about anything you want + sex?

EDIT: If it is writers block just start typing pure shit, doesn't matter if it makes sense, just type words, phrases, anything.
that should snap you out of it.

EDIT(again): lol it would be funny if they got turned on by a sex ed project (do they even have that senior year?)

I've been thinking about writing some good erotic stories.
LMAO HELL YA I remember the story! That was so fucking cool! If anyone can tell me wear to find it again I'd appreciate it.
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Old 2007-08-28, 09:47
ajardoor ajardoor is offline
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It isn't a sex-ed project, I originally had them doing an English project where the guy and the girl were in the same group (4 people total in the group). They're writing a report or something on a documentary they viewed in class.
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Old 2007-08-28, 09:59
Suicide_Mouse Suicide_Mouse is offline
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Couldn't you easily switch some words and sentences around? You said your self it was a short story, it's not like you would be redoing a novel or anything.

WTF MAN? I'm just trying to help.

P.S. sorry for my explosion of rage, I am indeed crazy.
 #8 
Old 2007-08-28, 10:03
ajardoor ajardoor is offline
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<SNIP>

Woah, woah, dude.

Calm down, breathe.

It's still all up in the air, okay? Nothing but the bare details have been decided yet, so just chill.
 #9 
Old 2007-08-28, 10:11
Suicide_Mouse Suicide_Mouse is offline
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Alright, all I'm saying is that it's going to be more difficult to do it about an english project then a sex ed project.

By easier I mean it would require less thinking to come up with a reason for the two to get on.

EDIT: At least in my school english projects were generally solo, so that the teacher can mark them properly and things like sex-ed tended to be more group orientated. Hence making it more believable AND making it easier to believe that they would get turned on.
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Old 2007-08-28, 10:27
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Generally, erotic literature isn't very subtle, and the plot is usually very obvious.
If it were me, I'd have the guy invite the girl round to study. He goes to the kitchen for some beer but is sidetracked. The girl looks around his room, trying to find out what kind of person he is etc, what books he has, bla bla bla. She stumbles upon some incriminating evidence somehow, and ends up blackmailing him with it.
The result being that he must sex her whenever she wants, in effect becoming his slave.
But that plot wouldn't end up very vanilla if I wrote it.
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Old 2007-08-28, 11:30
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Originally Posted by ajardoor
Currently, I'm trying to construct a plot for an erotic story (read: I thought a short story could be spiced up with a brazen sex scene).

Currently, I've set up the basic premise: guy is a high school student (final year, of course), girl is as well, they get put together on the same group project and somehow end up in bed.

Problem is, I can't think of the right 'catalyst' for the sex and I really want to develop the plot to make it fairly believable.

Anyone care to help me out?


Date rape/womans Viagra
 #12 
Old 2007-08-28, 14:09
ajardoor ajardoor is offline
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Date rape/womans Viagra

I'm sorry, what?
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Old 2007-08-28, 18:13
256 256 is offline
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Default Re: Help with an erotica plot

maybe write a couple of scenes where she comes over to his house to do the assignment, and its hinted that they are going to have sex but never do. build the tension then make them have sex in a totally unrelated way, eg. they go to a party and they just cant control it anymore and she grabs him by the hand and pushes him towards a wall or something.

I like this, but if you want to make it a bit more varied:

I'd have the guy invite the girl round to study. He goes to the kitchen for some beer but is sidetracked. The girl looks around his room, trying to find out what kind of person he is etc, what books he has, bla bla bla. She stumbles upon some incriminating evidence somehow, and ends up blackmailing him with it.
The result being that he must sex her whenever she wants, in effect becoming his slave.
But that plot wouldn't end up very vanilla if I wrote it.

I also demand that the final sex scene of the story should be connected to the event of the presentation they were working on. Maybe they should fuck in the auditorium where their class is watching the people who are presenting before them, or something.

I dunno. Work something out.

Also, I don't get how you have some details set, but haven't figured out the crucial plot mechanism here.

Are you just planning to write an erotic story, or are you adapting a semi-complete story into erotica?
 #14 
Old 2007-08-28, 18:19
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Dad rapes his 2 year old son. In the ass.

Then sticks his cock all the way up through it until his cock is reaching out of the babies mouth, he then grinds as fast as he can until he cums all over his mum.
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Old 2007-08-28, 18:46
Bean_Doodle Bean_Doodle is offline
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Originally Posted by i poop in your cereal
Dad rapes his 2 year old son. In the ass.

Then sticks his cock all the way up through it until his cock is reaching out of the babies mouth, he then grinds as fast as he can until he cums all over his mum.


"Plot twist!
Turns out the baby, is actually a well fed moose in disguise.

Oh that PedoDad, he done gone got imself in a whole heap o trouble this time round."

Id fucking watch that.
 #16 
Old 2007-08-29, 00:03
ZeroMalarki ZeroMalarki is offline
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Simple, they don't get on very well and fight constantly over the project until sexual tension kicks in and they have hot angry sex.
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Old 2007-08-29, 00:37
genericwittyusername genericwittyusername is offline
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Originally Posted by ZeroMalarki
Simple, they don't get on very well and fight constantly over the project until sexual tension kicks in and they have hot angry sex.


I like this one.
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Old 2007-08-29, 06:47
ajardoor ajardoor is offline
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I like this one.

Yeah, I thought about that angle as well.
 
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