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| Eat your words This forum, formerly known as Vogon poetry, has now been expanded to include all forums of literary creative expression. Please post ONLY your own work and try not to flame other users. Bad vogonesque poetry, is of course, still welcome here. |
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# 1

2007-06-17, 04:59
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Some poems my friend wrote...
And wow, they suck. I was cracking up laughing when I saw them on his myspace... They are incredibly emo... So here are a few:
I feel so alone
I feel so far away from home
Nothing seems right anymore
So I'm leaveing for ever more
Never was much into happy ever after
Always hated the sound of uncontorlable laughter
It seems since you were gone I just died and blew away
I should have known your feelings for me would never stay
I still don't hate you but I don't want you around
I rather me face frist lieing on the ground
Yeah, I just don't want to see you
I figured it was something you knew
I guess you can never take anything for what it worth
Cause your not worth anything to me
Anything to me
Cause the demons inside
Are coming alive
And they are make me decide
Who I keep alive
I just want to die
Live no more
Just cry
My
Heart out tonight
Let the feelings bleed
Let me
See
You face one more time
Before I die
Let the feelings bleed
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ROFL
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Because of You
A tear drop of blood
Face first in the mud
Sleeping in the durt
you made me hurt
Killed myself to live
I jsut hope I can forgive
You for what you've done
I guess thats why I run
Away, I hate everything about you
Everything I that I knew
Is wrong
But I gotta stay strong
I gotta hang on to what I got
And never remember what I forgot
This is why I am
What I am
Because of you!
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Sounded like he was trying to rip off Kelly Clarkson...
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Zack is Dead part2
I killed myself last night
And as I was dirfting into the light
I saw you still laughing at me
I still don't see
What made me such a joke to you
I wish I knew
I guess it's because I've been far away
For far to long
And always tired to hid so you could never notice me
But it's alright now
Because I'm gone
Try not laugh at yourself
Try not to hate yourself
You'll end just like me
Sleeping
In the reaper's bed
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You took my life and threw it away
I've been looking for until yesterday
I've got it all back now
Since I got rid of my frown
You never knew me that well just form time to time
I see I still got my old ryhme
So that Zack you though you knew
Is Dead
It's B.Y.O.B
Bring your own bomb
Manson is the dieabetic metic so he has to pee
Blake is just long for the ride
Sweny got scared and has no pride
Trent is phat two in one
We all had fun
Blake decide to stand up on the raft
Manson was casting spell like witch craft
Trying to catch a young girls eye
I guess we looked to high
We just chilling in the shade
J.D. started throwing hand gernades
Now He is leaving for boot camp
So we gave J.D. a stamp
So he could write
It's getting dark and we are losing light
Zack said some stuff about is life
And J.D. told him to kill his self with a knife
The words that he said change my ways
That's way I'm NOT standing here today
I got killed by my own two hands
Just because I could not understand
My ways of thinking about myself
You should never hate yourself
I hated everything about Zack
So I stabbed him in the back
Now he's dead
With no more thoughts in his head
Sleeping with the worms in his finial bead
Ash to ash and Dust to dust
Forget loveing only lust
That is on Zack's grave stone
With along with the initials in his bone
Rest in peace
Get some sleep at lease
Pathetic hahahah
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# 2

2007-06-17, 05:02
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Re: Some poems my friend wrote...
Do you ever feel like breaking down?
Do you ever feel out of place?
Like somehow you just don't belong
And no one understands you
Do you ever wanna run away?
Do you lock yourself in your room?
With the radio on turned up so loud
That no one hears you screaming
No you don't know what it's like
When nothing feels all right
You don't know what it's like
To be like me
To be hurt
To feel lost
To be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you're down
To feel like you've been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down
And no one's there to save you
No you don't know what it's like
Welcome to my life
Do you wanna be somebody else?
Are you sick of feeling so left out?
Are you desperate to find something more?
Before your life is over
Are you stuck inside a world you hate?
Are you sick of everyone around?
With their big fake smiles and stupid lies
While deep inside you're bleeding
No you don't know what it's like
When nothing feels all right
You don't know what it's like
To be like me
To be hurt
To feel lost
To be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you're down
To feel like you've been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down
And no one's there to save you
No you don't know what it's like
Welcome to my life
No one ever lied straight to your face
And no one ever stabbed you in the back
You might think I'm happy but I'm not gonna be okay
Everybody always gave you what you wanted
You never had to work it was always there
You don't know what it's like, what it's like
To be hurt
To feel lost
To be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you're down
To feel like you've been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down
And no one's there to save you
No you don't know what it's like (what it's like)
To be hurt
To feel lost
To be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you're down
To feel like you've been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down
And no one's there to save you
No you don't know what it's like
Welcome to my life
Welcome to my life
Welcome to my life
*cry**cut**cry*
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# 3

2007-06-17, 05:03
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Re: Some poems my friend wrote...
</emo>
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# 4

2007-06-17, 05:03
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Re: Some poems my friend wrote...
epic phail
and, wrong forum!
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# 5

2007-06-17, 05:07
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Regular
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In Casinoland getting drunk.
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Re: Some poems my friend wrote...
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# 6

2007-06-17, 05:07
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Re: Some poems my friend wrote...
Quote:
Originally Posted by precision_evil
epic phail
and, wrong forum!
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Many lulz ensued.
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# 7

2007-06-17, 05:11
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Re: Some poems my friend wrote...
Quote:
Originally Posted by poniti
Do you ever feel like breaking down?
Do you ever feel out of place?
Like somehow you just don't belong
And no one understands you
Do you ever wanna run away?
Do you lock yourself in your room?
With the radio on turned up so loud
That no one hears you screaming
No you don't know what it's like
When nothing feels all right
You don't know what it's like
To be like me
To be hurt
To feel lost
To be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you're down
To feel like you've been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down
And no one's there to save you
No you don't know what it's like
Welcome to my life
Do you wanna be somebody else?
Are you sick of feeling so left out?
Are you desperate to find something more?
Before your life is over
Are you stuck inside a world you hate?
Are you sick of everyone around?
With their big fake smiles and stupid lies
While deep inside you're bleeding
No you don't know what it's like
When nothing feels all right
You don't know what it's like
To be like me
To be hurt
To feel lost
To be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you're down
To feel like you've been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down
And no one's there to save you
No you don't know what it's like
Welcome to my life
No one ever lied straight to your face
And no one ever stabbed you in the back
You might think I'm happy but I'm not gonna be okay
Everybody always gave you what you wanted
You never had to work it was always there
You don't know what it's like, what it's like
To be hurt
To feel lost
To be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you're down
To feel like you've been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down
And no one's there to save you
No you don't know what it's like (what it's like)
To be hurt
To feel lost
To be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you're down
To feel like you've been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down
And no one's there to save you
No you don't know what it's like
Welcome to my life
Welcome to my life
Welcome to my life
*cry**cut**cry*
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And if your dad works at a bank then you should switch to disc 18.
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# 8

2007-06-17, 05:14
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Re: Some poems my friend wrote...
This should have been posted in EYW, but I'm not sendingsomething that bad there. You can post it there if you wish, though.
Edit: Uh, apparently some other Mod didn't mind...*Snicker*....
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TV is called a medium because it's not rare and it's not well done.
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# 9

2007-06-17, 05:14
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Re: Some poems my friend wrote...
Quote:
Originally Posted by Metaphysicist
This should have been posted in EYW, but I'm not sendingsomething that bad there. You can post it there if you wish, though.
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Lulz, you're a bit late.
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# 10

2007-06-17, 05:17
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Re: Some poems my friend wrote...
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