Here's a new one.
I'm going to post a copy of a convo with a girl I know.
I want &T to tell me what I could improve on/shouldn't of said.




Raise the sail.. says:
Look who it is.

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
i know look at it

Raise the sail.. says:
lol, how are you?

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
yeah thanks yourself?

Raise the sail.. says:
Yeah pretty good cheers.

Raise the sail.. says:
Good day?

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
yeah its been okay apart from p.e first period, how yours been?

Raise the sail.. says:
Pretty good. Got my English Mock back.
Not so good...

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
ohh... what did you get?

Raise the sail.. says:
A 'U' and an 'F'

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
ohhhhh... well.... it was only a mock!

Raise the sail.. says:
lol, I brought the average of the class down by two grades, lol =]

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
ohhh... lol.... well i wouldnt worry its only a mock

Raise the sail.. says:
lol, I wont.

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
good

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
what you up to tonight then?

Raise the sail.. says:
Nothing really. It's raining and I can't be arsed to go out, lol.

Raise the sail.. says:
What about you?

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
well im playing tennis and emmer has to watch me then were most likely going to get drunk

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
in the rain...

Raise the sail.. says:
lol, are you playing a match or something?

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
no just training today

Raise the sail.. says:
lol, good luck.

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
thanks

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
good luck with umm... nothing?

Raise the sail.. says:
Yeah, that's about it, lol.

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
lol

Raise the sail.. says:
So you got a friend there with you?

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
indeed her name is emma but we call her emmer

Raise the sail.. says:
Hey emms

Raise the sail.. says:
If you put your cam on I'll compare your looks..

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
hahaha!

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
no wayyyy in tennis gear

Raise the sail.. says:
haha, aw buff.

Raise the sail.. says:
Let me see!

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
nooo waayyyy!!

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
i look like a nerd

Raise the sail.. says:
Please? lol

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
and emmer just look triiiim

Raise the sail.. says:
Trim?

Raise the sail.. says:
Like skinny?

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
no like bufff....

Raise the sail.. says:
Not as buff as you I'm sure.

Raise the sail.. says:
(Sorry Emma) lol

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
lol thanks

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
obvs. not...

Raise the sail.. says:
lol, exactly.

Raise the sail.. says:
Is that her in your dp?

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
ofcourse

Raise the sail.. says:
lol

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
we look like retards though

Raise the sail.. says:
haha, nah. it's cute.

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
yaaayness

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
i know...

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
gtg now

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
tennis!!!

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
xxxxxxxxxxx

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
talk later?

Raise the sail.. says:
Sure thing.

Raise the sail.. says:
have fun xx

that was you trying to hit on her?

I will leave this one to the brits to judge. Its all gibberish to me

Raise the sail.. says:
lol, how are you?

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
yeah thanks yourself?.

Trying to smooth my way in.



I will leave this one to the brits to judge. Its all gibberish to me

Raise the sail.. says:
lol, how are you?

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
yeah thanks yourself?.

We can't all be literate.

say somethin like...

her: hey hows it goin?
you: pretty good now that im takin to u :)

to start things off

good flirting but in my experience girls are generally more flirtatious on msn than in person. sounds like she likes you though... I would chat online with her a few more times, see her in school, and then ask her out

That's a good one.
Any others?

She doesn't go to my school.
I met her at a gig.
I'm thinking about asking her out somewhere.

Don't make it formal, just keep everything light and just asks if she wants to do something, take things from there.

Honestly man, that was kind of horrible.

Then tell me what I should of said.

That looked like a conversation that friends would have. I didn't notice any tension in there. Try teasing her, especially when she says something that can be interpreted to have a sexual innuendo in it.

1/10

You have 2 problems:

1) don't pick up on Msn, it makes her think that you have no testicles

2) After reading this, she would be right. Grow a pair and try again.

You didn't have any tie-ins to a threesome. Rookie Mistake.

her: hello
you: SEX!!111???

That was boring and pathetic. Your grammar is bad and you seem dull as a fucking box.

A monumental fail.

i wouldn't say you "failed"

but

you didn't make any progress.

the key is to hint that you like her and see how she responds.

heres what should of happened for future reference....

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
what you up to tonight then?

Raise the sail.. says:
***not too sure yet, but we should hang out tonight, what are you doing?***

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
well im playing tennis and emmer has to watch me then were most likely going to get drunk

FRANKEE with emmer#### says:
in the rain...

Raise the sail.. says:
***cool, well i'll give you a call when you get back, whats your number?***



and chances are your getting something.

you just kept talking about tennis

This is not your blog!

her: hello
you: SEX!!111???

Exactly. Don't forget, in 5 cases out of a 100 she would reply with "sure".

That was the lamest flirting I've ever seen.

The trick is, you have to go out sometimes and get shot down on purpose, and you just tweak your game from there.

=CK=