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  #1   Add ramoo to your ignore list  
Old 2007-05-06, 11:16
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Question My stand up comedy I wrote for Half Baked

I Was Stoned

Last edited by ramoo : 2007-05-27 at 08:14. Reason: I WAS STONED
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Old 2007-05-06, 13:11
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Default Re: My stand up comedy I wrote for Half Baked

Not very funny at all.


Displays a remarkable sense of immaturity, comparable to that of Dane Cook.
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Old 2007-05-09, 03:44
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Not very funny at all.


Displays a remarkable sense of immaturity, comparable to that of Dane Cook.
Except that Dane Cook can get a chuckle out of his audience.
The only remotely funny part was the shampoo thing. Everything else was racism, and only Dave Chappelle and Carlos Mencia can get away with those jokes.
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Old 2007-05-09, 06:22
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Default Re: My stand up comedy I wrote for Half Baked

I did not lol.
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Old 2007-05-09, 15:45
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Damn, it's bad enough listening to canned laughter, but reading it?
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Old 2007-05-10, 23:46
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Your jokes are complete shit.

Your story, however, needed more violence, and a Virgina Tech reference.

Kill yourself.
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Old 2007-05-17, 18:32
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I had a problem with
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[audience laughs]
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Old 2007-05-24, 12:44
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haha I lol'd heartily. It was very surreal.
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Old 2007-05-27, 22:57
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Haven't you kids learned the lesson of Afroman?! "Because I got high, because I got high, because I got hi-i-i-gh." Don't post while stoned!
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Old 2007-05-31, 01:26
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i wanne see
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