heres a story, thats true, i know the form isn't that great, but the story is, just based on one of the best days of my life!, easily, hope you like it, and tell me what you think, its a long read, but well fucking worth it!

So, i used to live in an entirely different town,
a few hours from here it was kind of a hick town,
and i didn't have allot to do, or any cool people
to hangout with, except Jeff, Jeff was an asshole
and a dumbass, i only hung out with him cause he
liked to drink and smoke weed, and nobody else
in the entire town did, plus he had a really cool
sister that i dated for almost a year,Jeff used to
steal shit from me, like ear rights, necklaces, cologne,
all kinds of stupid shit, it would go missing, and a
few weeks later i would be at his house
and it would be sitting right there on his dresser,
so i would just steal it back, sometimes i would just
accuse him or stealing shit, and he would deny it, but
for some stupid fucking reason, i kept hanging
out with him, for the reasons stated above, the last
year or so that i lived in this this shithole of a town,
he had a cousin move into the town with him, who was
from the place i live now (portland Oregon)i hated this
fucking guy, he was a real piece of shit, we were in the
same grade, he annoyed the the Fuck out of everybody in
our school thought he was a Badass, he tried to "hookup"
with pretty much any girl in the school, arrogant piece
of shit, i didn't mind hanging out with him a few times,
until he tried to hit on this girl i really liked who i
was really good friends with, and apparently she said, "i
cant and wont date you or Fuck you, because i have matt
(that's me), And apparently he got really pissed off,
and said so what, and that i was a fucking loser
and he could and will beat my ass, and just said all
this shit about me so of course it got back to me, i seen
him a few days later, and he came over with Jeff one day,
and acted like nothing happened, even tho he had to
of known what he said got back to me, so there walking up
my porch and i was fast Jeff, and go straight to josh
and say "so you think you can Fuck me up eh?" And he goes
yea! i could do it right now if you want, so i lean back
and i punch him in the jaw as hard as i could, and there's
blood gushing from his mouth, his other cousin who is still
in the car runs out, while I fighting josh (the piece of
shit) and helps josh take me to the ground, and while I
down there,somebody lands a huge kick to my head, and i
couldn't see shit, one of my contacts broke in my eye, i
got back up andeverything was blurry i couldn't see hardly
anything, i wasdizzy and felt like i was gonna passout, so
after i stood up, josh punched me in the face probably 30 times,and i hit him maybe 5 times, but basically with some help, he wonthe fight,the kick cracked my skull and i hade to have surgery.


on it a few months later, anyways i finally move, well "run away".to portland, and start living with street kids on the street, doing drugs, seeing all kinds of awful shit, some of my friends died i almost died many times, anyways, fast forward 3 yeard later. Jeff messages me on myspace, and tells me he missed me and had no idea what happened to me, and that he is "so damn sorry" for being a douche before and that he's different, and he
would never do that shit again, apparently he has a girlfriend, and Jeff tells me he wants to come to portland and visit me, i Havant seen him in 4 years, so i tell him sure, he always wants me to take him around to all the head shops and such, and have me do a few tattoo's on him and his girl, cause that's what i do for a living now, so i say sure, you guys can come stay for a day and a night, he and tells me his girlfriend has a friend that there bringing too, and i go yeah sure, i don't mind trying to score some tail, then Jeff tells me the day that he's coming that he's
brining josh too, andi tell him no fucking way and i talk to josh, he messaged me and says he's sorry etc., In the back ofmy head i think to myself,yeah bring him over, and ill break his fucking teeth out, so i say sure, come over, so when they get here at my house, i welcome them all him, i guess the extra girl that Jeff brought used to date josh, so i was like eh, no thanks to myself, not her, so we start drinking and talking, and the whole time, this chick is giving me the eye, allot of sexual tension going on, and I kind of confused to why, but i really didn't care anymore and starred at her back, and looked at her body and down her legs while we were all talking, and he flirt some from
across the room with talking, and drink a little more, none of us
are even drunk, so a while later, I going down the hall,
and she kind of stops me while I walking past her, note, josh is seeing all of this, and she puts her face right up against mine and kisses me, and smiles, and all of a sudden,I like, oh shit, I gonna Fuck the hell out of this girl, if only i could get her alone she was really fucking pretty despite dating josh before, so after a while everything is going fine, and i get reminded of why i wanted to see josh, when he takes off the music I playing and puts in some stupid ass shit like ludacris, so I like oh yeah, so i walk into the living room, where everybody is, and punch the living Fuck out of josh in the face( and no it wasn't completely
by surprise) Jeff, and the girls don't seem to surprised for some odd reason, josh tried to fight back, but i hit him in the face and head so many times he doesn't have a chance basically i beat the shit out of him, till he is on the ground and helpless, Jeff and the girls are like holly shit, and while josh is on the ground, i explain to them what happened 4 years before when him and his other cousin jumped me, the girl, Krissy, go "holly shit, so you think he deserved this??" and i go, "Fuck yeah" and she looks at Jeff, and Jeff shakes his head "yes" so Krissy still shocked and says to josh "well that's what you get for being a fucking asshole, finally got your Fuck'n ass beat" and josh to my surprise doesn't run out of the house or try to grab a weapon after getting his ass beat he just stands up,and walks over to the couch, and kind of holds his head, which is
swelling up all over his face, back of his head, everywhere, soafter standing there for a minute to make sure he wasn't gonna flip out, i go and put some ice in a bag and give it to him, he looks up at me while i hand it to him, and he says"thanks man" so after a while, he's still sitting there, with his head and facing swelling up, drinking beer and smoking weed, not causing any
problems, the rest of the time i talk to Jeff and Krissy about
some of the actual good shit that happened, all the stupid and fun shit we used to do, get kind of drunk and just laugh, i tattoo Jeff for about an hour, then i tattoo a small rose on kirssy's ass, while everybody kind of watched, the entire time, i just wanted to pull her panties off, and lick her pussy and ass from behind, i imagine her pussy being really fucking while while i tattoo her ass, alls i can think about its shoving my cock up her pussy and facing her face to face, making her scream in my face while i Fuck her, feeling my cock, deep in her little cunt, making her cum with my cock, fucking her till she cries in pleasure, my cock is about to jump out of my fucking pants, but of course i do nothing, yet, so we all watch some movies and drink a little more
everybody is getting kind of drunk except me and Krissy, i didn't know if she was thinking it too, but at the time i though I not gonna get drunk, I gonna stay sober, so i can Fuck her tonight, after a while its about 3 in the morning, josh and Jeff and his girlfriend are talking and being drunk, after a while everybody is laying on a couch or on the ground about to fall asleep while watching some of my dvd's, Jeff is like holly shit we all better go to sleep if were gonna hit some headshops in the morning before they have to go home, they have to be back by 2 or
something, i go outside to smoke, and i hear josh saying "Krissy, some here lets fall asleep, we have to be up early, when i go back inside, she's sitting next to him, i get really fucking jealous, and go get some blankets, and pillows, enough for 2, and i lay on the ground, and chill for a while, after about 5 minutes of chilling on the ground, she gets up and comes over to me and lays on thefloor next to me, i look over at josh and Jeff and there just watching the DVD, at this time i could hardly control myself anymore, i get over top of her really aggressively, pin her down with both her arms above her head and starts kissing her really fucking hard, she loves me, she starts to moan as i kiss and suck
on her neck taking her top off, not even paying attention to see if Jeff or josh are watching, i don't give a mother Fuck how mad or jealous josh is, and apparently neither does she, i take her short and bra off, and suck on her tits and stomach, sucking down lower to her navel,unbuttoning her pants, licking the skin above her pussy, she makes me stop for about 3 seconds so we can stand up, and rush off into my bedroom, on my way out of the living room I taking off my shirt, we go into my bend room, and i get behind her and pull her pants down exposing her ass.

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Pulling down her panties and start licking her pussy from behind, i tell her to reach back and spread her ass cheeks so i can lick her cunt some more and she does as i say, and squirms around and moans, i stand up, while she turns around, and takes my pants off, my cock is fucking huge at the moment, pounding, throbbing, really fucking hard, really fucking ready, i hold my cock to her face, waiting for her to suck it, she's reaching down and playing with her pussy, and says to me "she doesn't know how" and that she
never sucked cock before, and i go, "just open your mouth", i put my cock in her mouth, and pull her hair some, i can tell she's starting to enjoy it, she takes my cock out of her mouth for a few seconds and kisses my stomach and says "omg, i think i love you" then she keeps sucking my cock i pin her down again, and push my cock in her pussy, really fucking deep, my cock is against the furthest wall in her pussy, filling it up all the fucking way, i can tell its hurting her, but at the moment, i really don't care, and she's liking it too, despite all the pain, after that i Fuck her doggy style, and with her legs on my shoulders, after she
comes for the second time, i go down and eat her pussy, sucking on her clit, licking it, pushing my tongue inside her pussy as far as i can, after she cums, i stand up, and put one of her hands on my cock and she strokes it, towards her mouth, not expecting me to cum, as soon as some cum starts to cum out onto her mouth and face, she starts jerking it harder, getting all of the cum out, i look down and she has cum all over her face, its like the biggest fucking
load I've ever had, not to mention the best orgasm I've
ever had, she is still kind of shocked with all this cum in her
face and mouth, so i use cock and index finger to get all the cum off her face, and put it in her mouth, she swallows it, we Fuck and talk all night, for maybe 4 hours she told me she only had sex "once or twice" before but couldn't really enjoy it, cause she
felt pressured ext.


In the morning, Jeff tells me, josh was almost balling while
i was fucking her, we go to some head shops and shop around, but some pieces and i buy a small hookah, when there getting ready to leave i grab Krissy before she gets in the car and say, "you know you should stay with me" I being only half serious and she goes "really?? you would let me" and i say "Fuck yes" so she tells them she's gonna stay for a while with me, i told her i would take her back in a few days, its been 4 days, and she starts college in Florida on the 3rd of the mouth, so I gonna take her home on the first, so she can get ready to go, hopefully after she goes to college and such, i can see her again someday, ill be something i can look forward to forever, I gonna keep in contact, and were gonna E-mail eachother and tell eachother how things are and what's going on, she's awesome, i think maybe someday in 10
years.. i could marry her.

The end

Matt Bynum



:P

Is it wrong to use a word like "intense" to describe apathy? Because that's how I feel right now.

I saw about 4 periods in that whole story. It would be erotica section worthy if it wasn't written by a dyslexic chimp, I give it a 7/10 for sxcness, a 1/10 for skill.

Nigga You Got Knocked The Fuck Out

I have tried hard to find one single good thing to say about this, to find one redeeming feature.

Alas I can't.

It IS crap.

The sort of 'true' story 14 year olds write.

And I demand a refund on the 10 minutes of my life wasted.

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I didn't read it but it looks hideous.

Fix the grammar and put it into paragraphs.

Yea I would have almost, just almost, considered reading it had you put it into correctly portioned paragraphs. Anyhow after reading Jackketches opinion I think I'll give it a miss.

Yeah, I read equivilant to a paragraph and...well, I didn't like it at all.

dude, he's a fucking dumbass, i didnt use sentances and such, because i typed in it 15 minutes into the broswer, i didnt exept some forum nazi's to be pieces of shit, becaus i didnt put it all in form, just read the fucking thing.