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| Sex and Affection Anything and everything about sex and relations. Please try to keep this forum on-topic, since things tend to wander a bit. Search through old topics before posting a new one, as questions get repeated a lot here. |
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 2007-04-19, 18:31 |
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 Yet another Incest story. FICTION
lock lock
steak me
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2007-04-19, 18:39 |
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Re: Yet another Incest story. FICTION
bump, entertain me.
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2007-04-19, 19:10 |
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Re: Yet another Incest story. FICTION
Sentence fragments galore. Your overuse of adjectives makes it sound forced. It doesn't flow. Also, it's pretty clearly 'cheap' erotica. What's the motive?
Hope you were entertained.
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#4
2007-04-19, 19:17 |
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Re: Yet another Incest story. FICTION
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Originally Posted by Toraton
Sentence fragments galore. Your overuse of adjectives makes it sound forced. It doesn't flow. Also, it's pretty clearly 'cheap' erotica. What's the motive?
Hope you were entertained.
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i think i did some fragments on purpose -shifty eyes-
and i wouldnt call it erotica. just seems like a smutty story.:D
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#5
2007-04-19, 20:41 |
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Re: Yet another Incest story. FICTION
I lul'd.
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2007-04-19, 20:46 |
Strakynyar Krongoth 
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Re: Yet another Incest story. FICTION
I want jackketch to finish his erotica story, unless I somehow missed it.
Did I miss it? Could someone link me if I did please?
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