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| Sex and Affection Anything and everything about sex and relations. Please try to keep this forum on-topic, since things tend to wander a bit. Search through old topics before posting a new one, as questions get repeated a lot here. |
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#1
 2007-04-07, 07:32
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This is an erotica I wrote last year.
Enjoy!
Sixteen-year-old Jasmine rubbed her delicate pussy through her soft, white panties during class. Hand down her pants, she moaned just loud enough to get her friends attention, who was sitting next to her, actually trying to learn for once. Quiet, Jasmine. the dumb slut friend whispered to her. Youre gonna get us in trouble again.
Jasmine and Stephanie! The teacher, Mr. Lick said sternly. Come up the front this instant.
Fuck. Jasmine cursed, as she stood up along with Steph. They walked towards the front of the room.
Great going, Jasmine. Steph said, rolling her eyes. Steph and Jasmine were the only two girls in the whole math class. The rest of the students obviously consisted of boys; seven of them to be exact.
Girls, for talking, its my job to punish you. Since this is math class, how about we make the punishment a little more exciting? Mr. Lick smiled. Subtract your clothing. The girls stared at each other horrified, while the boys of the class grinned interestedly. Hurry up! Remove your shirt and shorts. We dont have all day. The two girls did as they were told, feeling as awkward as theyd ever been. All the guys started cheering once all the clothes were off. Their shaved pussies were the best Mr. Lick had seen in his life, and being the age of fifty, he had seen a lot of pussies. Now then
Mr. Lick began. Lets start with Jasmine.
The perverted teacher gently held Jasmines right boob in his hand, and then began to squeeze. Jasmine started to cry. She didnt want to be raped again; not after the traumatizing incident with her father a while back. What the Hells your problem, freak?! Steph screamed, causing the teacher to retreat his hand from its place. Mr. Licks face went red with anger. He stormed over to the bimbo blonde and grabbed her by the arms.
Just for that, Im going to do more than I was going to! He growled. A frightened Jasmine backed into the corner of the room and slid to the ground, crying. I need four boys to hold an arm or leg each! Mr. Lick yelled. And with that, four of the seven students immediately ran from their desks and held, as tight as they could, an arm or leg each.
Mr. Lick pulled down his trousers and whipped out his cock as Steph began to cry. He shoved it into her relatively tight pussy and began to thrust it up and down. Meanwhile, another one of the students wanted in on the action. He shot from his desk and ran behind Steph. He pulled out his cock and shoved it into her bubble butt, also beginning to thrust. Eventually blood started oozing out of her pussy, which only turned on Mr. Lick more. At that moment he ejaculated more sperm than he had ever ejaculated into the girls body. Sir? Do we have to hold on anymore? One of the boys asked, who was holding onto her left leg. I cant stand being so close to your cock anymore.
Mr. Lick sighed and removed his cock from Stephs pussy. Fine, Im finished. Now lay her down and have your way with her. The teacher said. The four boys grinned and shoved her to the floor. Mr. Anals dick was forced out with the push.
You bastards! I was about to cum! He frowned.
One of the boys shoved his cock right down Stephs throat, choking her. She tried to bite, but it just turned the chap on even more. Two boys fondled her boobs, while the other played with her pussy. Eventually, the penis choking poor Steph done its job and stopped her from breathing.
Steph was dead.
Mr. Lick walked over to Jasmine, smiling. The poor thing was crying her eyes out, wishing it would just stop. The teacher then noticed that two boys were still sitting at their desks. You two! You even literally eaten a pussy before?
***
While the other five boys made their way with the deceased Stephanie, Mr. Lick and the two boys dragged the screaming Jasmine down the hall. They eventually came to the school cafeteria. Put her up on the table, boys. Mr. Lick ordered, after they entered the kitchen.
The boys did what they were told and Mr. Lick tied Jasmines hands and legs together like a pig. One of the boys thought it would be funny to stick an apple in her mouth, and boy, it was! Sure, her jaw broke in the process, but we must remember that girls are simply objects.
Mr. Lick found some butter and placed it on the table. The trio slopped some up with their hands and started spreading it all over Jasmines naked body. They got into every crevasse and were soon done before they knew it. The stuff you can do when people work together!
Tears streamed down Jasmines face. She knew what was coming, even for a stupid brunette, and definitely didnt want to be cooked and eaten. The good news is, Jasmine
Mr. Lick began, pulling out a syringe. That thanks to modern science, when I inject you with this liquid, you wont die at all until weve eaten any vital organs! That means you can be cooking for an hour, feel the horrible pain, but still continue to live! And with that he injected the formula into her ass, causing her muffled scream to fill the room.
The boys laughed with excitement, and one of them sprinkled some garlic onto her back. Now the girl was ready to be cooked. Mr. Lick picked her up, placed her onto a tray, and slid her into the oven. Then he closed the door and turned on the heat.
To pass the time, one of the boys stuck a gerbil up his ass.
Eventually, an hour later, Jasmine was ready to be eaten. Mr. Lick opened the door and pulled her out. She was a nice, crisp brown, and still screaming. It hurt to cry, or move. She was placed back on the table, and one of the boys stuck a fork in her back. She screamed louder than she had ever screamed in her life, even though the apple was preventing her from making too much of a noise.
Mr. Lick grabbed a knife and fork and began to help himself. He started slicing off her right butt cheek as she screamed and cried. Even though she was cooked, there was a lot of blood emerging.
I know this is off topic
Said one of the boys to the other. But Im moving with my auntie and uncle in Bel Air.
Mr. Lick turned the girl around, cut off her left breast, and held it out to the Bel Air boy. Tit? He asked.
Yes, please! He replied with a smile, grabbing the breast and taking a bite out of it.
Mr. Lick finished eating her butt cheek, and the boys finished eating her tits. Well
Began Mr. Lick. I think I speak for all of us when I say Im full. Lets throw this shit out.
He picked her up and dumped her into the bin. She screamed for help as he closed the lid on her. Then the trio left the room, leaving her to die.
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#2
 2007-04-07, 08:05
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Mojo Savage 
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
I hope you die in a freak yatching accident, you sick, sad little man...
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#3
 2007-04-07, 08:09
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
i lolled hard, i dont know why, but i broke out laughing twice in it
(not your desired effect, i know)
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#4
 2007-04-07, 08:11
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nuclearrabbit 
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
To pass the time, one of the boys stuck a gerbil up his ass.
LMFAO
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#5
 2007-04-07, 08:22
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
LMFAO
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#6
 2007-04-07, 08:33
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
Didn't pass my check-for-bel-air routine, didn't read :P
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#7
 2007-04-07, 08:36
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akiratheoni 
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
lol dude wtf was that??
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#8
 2007-04-07, 09:19
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
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Originally Posted by vancouver222
i lolled hard, i dont know why, but i broke out laughing twice in it
(not your desired effect, i know)
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I'm pretty sure that was the desired affect:D
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#9
 2007-04-07, 09:52
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
Enter you kick ass dude.
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#10
 2007-04-07, 12:53
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
Yeah. wow. Just wow.
The rape was nice, the eating, wayyy too Albert Fish for me.
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#11
 2007-04-07, 13:30
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
If you ever become a film director, you will have a cult following.
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#12
 2007-04-07, 13:57
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
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Originally Posted by ShouldTrip
Yeah. wow. Just wow.
The rape was nice, the eating, wayyy too Albert Fish for me.
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Damn it I looked up Albert Fish on wiki and now I can't sleep:(
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#13
 2007-04-07, 14:50
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
*sighs for some realism in erotica*
I feel duty bound to point out that forcing even a large cooking apple into a girl's mouth will not break her jaw. It may well dislocate it, but break no.
You may trust me on that fact...
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#14
 2007-04-07, 17:04
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midnight rider 
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
i came.no i didnt man, that was fucking wierd.
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#15
 2007-04-07, 17:17
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
Cecil B Demented :rockon:
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#16
 2007-04-07, 17:23
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
Haha, I got to wear he put his hand on the girls boob, and Steph said you sick fuck. I was like, well I'm not getting turned on, then I scrolled down and saw BEL-AIR. Nice one.
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#17
 2007-04-08, 02:40
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
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Originally Posted by anarchyburger2.0
Haha, I got to wear he put his hand on the girls boob, and Steph said you sick fuck. I was like, well I'm not getting turned on, then I scrolled down and saw BEL-AIR. Nice one.
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I was going to end it at bel-air, but I wanted to have an ending just to make it seem not so pointless.
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#18
 2007-04-08, 05:22
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
Hahahahahahahaha Half Mast :(
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#19
 2007-04-08, 09:35
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Mojo Savage 
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
Damn it I looked up Albert Fish on wiki and now I can't sleep:(
Me too. Even after reading this post...
[Curls up in corner, foetal position, twitching.]
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#20
 2007-04-08, 10:49
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
that was some pretty hardcore shit, nice job though
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#21
 2007-04-08, 11:13
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
Me too. Even after reading this post...
[Curls up in corner, foetal position, twitching.]
I read about him too it wasn't that bad. *Smiles*
Well okay it was pretty fucked up, but... yeah... ...I always knew shit like that happened in this world, so it doesn't affect me as much. *shrugs*
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#22
 2007-04-08, 12:55
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
i forgot to mention that the "Tit?" part of the story cracked me up.
Though i'm not very sure i'd consider eating a whole tit, since it's mostly made of fat... i'd probably just eat just the skin and the nipple.
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#23
 2007-04-10, 04:00
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
Yeah... same.
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#24
 2007-04-10, 16:13
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Knobchops 
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Re: This is an erotica I wrote last year.
I liked the positive messages spread throughout the raping and the cannabilism.
"The stuff you can do when people work together!"
Keep up the good work, there.
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