I didn't remove all the 'now's, but it should be fairly readable. Some parts I didn't understand and thus was unable to fix, so I left a (???) after the sentence.
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Life is full of choices. I believe the first two humans that ever existed were perfect. Now, there is no true way to judge what is perfect because everyone has their own opinion, but what I mean by perfect is they're the first. They can't be compared to anything else because they are the first. You can always compare them to each other, but they are male and female, and that isn't a true comparison. So is comparing them to another animal like an ape.
Now, when the first male and female were born, they were born pure. They had no influences, no history, no past -- nothing. They had to work together and make choices that would benefit them. They would live their lives learning new things, good and bad. Now they were the first so there wasn't a consquence for anything you did. They didn't know anything; whatever they did was natural. They would have to figure out how to eat and drink, they would know how pain felt, and they had to learn what benefited them and what didn't. They made choices to help make their lives better so they could be happy.
Now, these are all choices they had to make. Now, it isn't TRUE human nature to KILL someone for no apparent reason. They had no influence that would even suggest it; they didnt even know if they could die. They had to learn from these things. This was the true test to see if the humans were truly perfect, and they were. Now, there was NOTHING they could do that was a wrong choice unless they did it a second time, but they wouldn't unless it would somehow benefit them. They never made any bad choices.
Now, they would live their lives learning more and more, being more and more curious. They would try new things and try to find out what to do at certain times. When they learned enough to reproduce and make a baby is when they had passed their test. If a perfect human could not live their lives and become smart enough or learn to reproduce, they weren't truly perfect. Now, the story of Adam and Eve eating the golden apples from the tree when god said not to is, in my eyes, the opposite. I think it was a test. Rules are meant to be broken. Curiosity is what makes the human race so unique. Without curiosity we would not be able to progress into new technology, we would be stuck living in caves having babies forever. Also, the story of Pandora's box is something I believe in, but when she opened it it didnt let out hate, evil, or sadness; it let out two things: good choices and bad choices. If Pandora wouldn't have opened it she would had died and she could have had the choice to do anything and would have failed as a human.
Now, let's get back to the two perfect humans. As they started to reproduce they would want the baby to be the best it could be. Their thoughts were un-influenced, and they would teach it what they had learned had helped them, and what didn't they would use to help their baby be better than them, live a better life, and to learn faster. Now that they had one baby it was either a boy or a girl. Now, this is also where curiosity kicks in. If they could have a boy, well then maybe they could also have a girl. They would then reproduce. Now the chances are 50/50, but hey, let's say they had a girl. Now that they had two they would teach her the same things. They would learn that, say, the male was stronger. He could gather food easier, or maybe he just did some things better than the girl did. He would then teach them to his son and try to teach him to do them better, and same with the girl. The boy and girl would grow up to be older, and the parents would teach the two now, say, teenagers how to reproduce.
Now, see, this is how time affects us. Now, I think that there isn't a heaven or hell. I think that when you are on earth it's the choices you make that make your live a heaven or hell. Happiness is the key. Everyone wants to do what makes them happy, and anyone can be happy by making good choices. Now, these days there are influences everywhere. As time progressed the humans made some good and ba decisions. There are tons, like eating too much food and gaining weight. Not to be mean but being fat is not how a human should be. You can be happy, but you wouldn't be perfect anymore. Now, perfection can now be measured on how the first humans looked like, and seeing how I would see a human being perfect and being able to do everything mentally and physically without any trouble would be someone skinny -- not too skinny -- but have meat(???). Size of the body is the only thing that makes a true physical difference. I mean everyone looks different. There are some people we may say are ugly, but that's just how society sees people these days. We are so influenced by looks that we have to compare ourselves. Now, you can be overweight and still look good, but you won't be able to perform physically the same as if you were normal for your height. The first perfect male could have been ugly, but he could do everything physically and mentally to his fullest. Now, being good looking is a plus, but it is random and isn't something that you should change these days. You can but it's bad.
Now, being perfect truly isn't about how you were born, but the choices you make each day to keep or accomplish that perfect state. Now, you can be heavier, ugly, and still live happily and be in YOUR type heaven, but you won't be able to live in to the FULLEST. Everyone's heaven is different, but again, it is influenced by the passage of time. We get curious, we want things, and we sometimes want things as fast as possible. We try many things doing this, and we learn that helping and offering works well, but in time we also learn that fear works, and with less cost and time. Fear is a choice that makes your life a better heaven, but makes there more of a hell, and I believe that to make the world perfect everyone must reach their perfect, non-influenced heaven. Now, the longer we made bad choices the bigger hole we dug ourselves into. If we had started sooner we could have reached the perfect heaven, but it is human nature to make good and bad choices. We weren't evolved enough, but the more evolved we got the more of a hole we were in. Now, BAD influence is one of the biggest things that is keeping us from reaching our perfect heaven. Rules are another. Rules are all things you shouldn't do, and things you shouldn't do have consequences. Now, bad consequences inspire FEAR. Fear is something that we humans should never feel. It is something that keeps us from becoming a better human. Rules also display an idea. Everyone in their lifetime thinks, "hey what if I killed this person? Would I go to jail, would I be sent to the electric chair, or am I smart enough to get away with it?" Again, curiosity is a good thing.
Now, there are many things in the world that can help you live your life happily and they are religions. Religions teach you many things. There are a lot of them, and everyone is different. Now, if you find a religion you like, you will be happy you will follow what they say. Now, these religions are things we created to help us reach our perfect heaven. Humans also have hope, and it is something that can battle fear, hatred, and greed. All religions have their own unique rules and responsibilities, but not everyone will find one that they like. When you join a religion you are happy, and your life is usually filled with happiness. Religions support helping others being kinda religions help towards the greater good(???).
Now, there are rules for things you shouldn't do, but they are things that we shouldn't do anyway. Rules can help us, and we do need them at the age we are in. We have become so corrupt that we need rules. Now, rules tell you the basics, such as not to kill or steal things, that you shouldn't do because they will keep you and others from their perfect heaven. Now, our perfect heaven will take a lot of time. Now, over time people start to question, so religions start with the basics. Religions teach you how to reach your OWN perfect heaven. Now, all religions are old and they were written by people from the past. Now, don't you think if they would write a religion it would be to warn us and to help us make the right choices? That is what a religion called Christianity does -- it teaches you how to accomplish your own perfect heaven, and that is the first start. Once we all accomplish this it will be easy. Now, religions aren't for everyone but it sets up guidelines. Now, you can reach your perfect heaven without a religion as long as you make good choices and not bad ones. Now, if god really sent us the 10 commandments, and the bible was written, he knows that we aren't ready for the whole picture. We must start off by first accomplishing our own perfect heaven. "Thou shall not kill" is the first commandment. Killing someone for any reason is something that can be cut off at the neck. If we all made the right choices -- didn't use fear, did things as fast as possible without making someone else suffer, or we weren't influenced to believe that being better is good and makes other people like you more -- it would stop and it wouldn't happen. These are all choices that can be made to help you and also other bad choices can sometimes benefit you, but at a cost of someone else's.
Now, what is so unique about this system is that I think it is a test of our TRUE physical and mental capabilities to truly reach our perfect heaven. We have many, many chances, and what I mean is we live our lives, we make our choices, and we choose to make our lives a heaven or a hell. Now, making our own lives a heaven and doing it without fear or making someone else's life worse is the first step. Now, this truly hard, as many people know, but we have a lot of chances. Now, I think that when we die we are reborn; we have another chance. We can't remember but we try again. We try and do things that benefit ourselves, and then maybe even help other people. We live our lives, make our choices. Now, it may be bad or it may be good, so the faster we reach our perfect heaven the easier it is. The more time it takes, the more fear, hatred, and greed have grown and take over. We have unlimited chances as long as we reproduce.
Now, one of our goals as humans is time travel. Now, there are two kinds of time travel time -- travel into the future and into the past. Now, when everyone thinks of time travel to the past someone influenced by, say, paleontology would go back to see how the dinosaurs died, or how they lay or ate. But any normal still-learning human would want to go back into time to change something they did or to stop something that happened. Now, there are two things they would want to stop. One is something that can't be stopped, and the other can. The thing someone can stop would be a bad choice -- something they did that didn't benefit them and just made things worse or made the hole bigger. Now, again, it comes down to choices. The other thing that can't be stopped would be a death. A death is something that isn't something you wanted to happen. It was either the person's choices that lead to their death or someone else's choice to take that person's life away. Now, fear, hatred, and greed are things that are evil. They only add up, and are things that keep us from our perfect heaven. If we all made good choices everyone would live and die of old age. Now, the second time travel would be to the future. Again, there are two things you could do. You would usually go to the future to see how you would turn out, to see if you made good or bad choices. The second thing would be to stop something that you saw, like a terrorist attack or someone shooting someone else. It all comes down to fear, hatred, and greed. If you think of it this way, we shouldn't call it time travel. We should call it choice travel. When we die we are reborn, and we go back to the beginning. All our choices still affect the world we live in, but you aren't affected by it mentally or physically. However, every bad choice you made just made it harder and harder to reach the perfect heaven. Every day people make bad choices, and people make good choices. It just makes the hole deeper and deeper, but the sooner we unite, the smarter we become, and the more we will learn that fear, hatred, and greed may help us in this life but not in the other. Everyone makes these choices, both men and women, but they are all different. Now, reaching the perfect heaven will take time, but we don't have unlimited time. The more time we waste, the more people are making this world harder and harder to help. We make weapons just to kill ourselves, and we even make missiles. The deadline is when everyone is dead. It proves that in the short run we are greedy, and we get what we want now at any cost. It proves that humans aren't perfect; it is all a test the longer we wait.
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