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| Sex and Affection Anything and everything about sex and relations. Please try to keep this forum on-topic, since things tend to wander a bit. Search through old topics before posting a new one, as questions get repeated a lot here. |
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#1
 2007-03-07, 21:20
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oc6 
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You Love Me...Long Time (an erotic story)
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#2
 2007-03-07, 21:21
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dodging the rain and tractors
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Re: You Love Me...Long Time (an erotic story)
YAy! H4wT GrAnNY SUx Cock0Rzzz !!1111
:P
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#3
 2007-03-07, 21:27
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Re: You Love Me...Long Time (an erotic story)
Jack, stand in the corner

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#4
 2007-03-07, 21:32
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Re: You Love Me...Long Time (an erotic story)
Ok, seriously now. Its very very good, It certainly got me hard reading it.
Bit unrealistic though...where are the bits about the dog suddenly deciding to crap on the carpet, the sick child and the phone call from the Mother-in-law just as things were 'heating up'?
Also I think it could use a couple of bald headed lesbians...
Although as Flock says, any erotic story that doesn't start with long blond hair and heaving double E cup tits, has to be a winner 
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#5
 2007-03-07, 21:53
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Re: You Love Me...Long Time (an erotic story)
Vanilla is good, yours is no exception.
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#6
 2007-03-07, 22:32
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Re: You Love Me...Long Time (an erotic story)
It was a very..soft, yet very sweet erotic fiction.
This may be sick and twisted, but I couldnt help imaganing the couple as OC6 and jacketch...
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#7
 2007-03-07, 22:34
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Docta? 
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Re: You Love Me...Long Time (an erotic story)
quote:Originally posted by yoyobek:
This may be sick and twisted, but I couldnt help imaganing the couple as OC6 and jacketch...
Wasnt that the point?!
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#8
 2007-03-07, 22:36
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Re: You Love Me...Long Time (an erotic story)
Ahem. I uh- need to go take care of some business now.
*cough*
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#9
 2007-03-07, 22:37
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Re: You Love Me...Long Time (an erotic story)
Admittedly it doesn't turn me on.
But it did make me smile and giggle a bit, in a good way I promise.
It was very sweet.
Nice work, keep it up (no pun intended?)!
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#10
 2007-03-07, 22:50
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Re: You Love Me...Long Time (an erotic story)
quote:Originally posted by yoyobek:
It was a very..soft, yet very sweet erotic fiction.
This may be sick and twisted, but I couldnt help imaganing the couple as OC6 and jacketch...
NO it wasn't. Please believe me on this.
Anyway can you really imagine t3h K3tCh being that vanilla?????!!!!
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#11
 2007-03-07, 23:01
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oc6 
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Re: You Love Me...Long Time (an erotic story)
I can jack. Yes, I can imagine that.
But...I have a strong feeling that I would go outside of vanilla with you under the right circumstances.
I can't imagine that with anyone else though.
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#12
 2007-03-07, 23:04
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Re: You Love Me...Long Time (an erotic story)
quote:Originally posted by oc6:
I can jack. Yes, I can imagine that.
But...I have a strong feeling that I would go outside of vanilla with you under the right circumstances.
I can't imagine that with anyone else though.
Hon, if i were within ten feet of you and you were only dressed in white panties....I would so NOT need any little blue pills! Not with that body!
Remember it isn't just your mind that I desire.
BASTA!
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#13
 2007-03-07, 23:05
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oc6 
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Re: You Love Me...Long Time (an erotic story)
* kisses and tingles *
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#14
 2007-03-08, 00:09
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XHippie HunterX 
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Re: You Love Me...Long Time (an erotic story)
Ok im finished with my business, and can now rejoin the thread.
Good work. I just sorta blanked out the whole "old people" portion of this thread and sorta reinvented them as me and this ridiculously hot girl who sits in front of me in my cinema class...
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#15
 2007-03-08, 00:33
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oc6 
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Re: You Love Me...Long Time (an erotic story)
Damn...I don't feel that old. Well...some days I don't anyway. Definately not today.
*flips through photographs*
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#16
 2007-03-08, 00:35
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Re: You Love Me...Long Time (an erotic story)
quote:Originally posted by oc6:
Damn...I don't feel that old. Well...some days I don't anyway. Definately not today.
*flips through Daugerrotypes *
fixed :P
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#17
 2007-03-08, 00:43
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oc6 
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Re: You Love Me...Long Time (an erotic story)
quote:Originally posted by jackketch:
fixed :P
[laughs]
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#18
 2007-03-08, 01:48
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Twisted_Ferret 
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Re: You Love Me...Long Time (an erotic story)
quote:Originally posted by jackketch:
H4wT GrAnNY
Gross man, you made me rofl my wofl
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#19
 2007-03-08, 05:16
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phmeworp 
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Re: You Love Me...Long Time (an erotic story)
quote:Originally posted by jackketch:
Hon, if i were within ten feet of you and you were only dressed in white panties....I would so NOT need any little blue pills! Not with that body!
Remember it isn't just your mind that I desire.
BASTA!
Can you two just fucking get an e-room or something?
sheesh!!!
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