im gunna type up a story and i want you to tell me if its good or not sex story of course wit hincest seeing how many seem to like it

I had a boring ass day at school being pissed off about my asshole teacher failing on my science project. As I walked home thinking about how good it was gunna be all alone to wank off all day to hentai and porn.As I put the key in the door and walked in there sat my sister on the couch watching some lame ass reality tv. "Fucking hell WTF is she doing here" I thought as i walked to my room in more anger i hear my sister call out "Hey can you do me a favor?" she says as i turn around to see her sitting there in her pajammas."Mom told me she can't take me to my friends tonight to pratice for my actinng performance can you help me with it?" she said staring at me with intent eyes."Get dad to do it" I said "He had to goto chicago today for a interview with a client won't be back till sunday and mom won't be back till monday" she said "Fine come to my room and well pratice"I said as I walked into my room closing the door i began to change, taking my boxers off looking down at my semi hard dick i look up and see my sister standing in the doorway. "omg wtf" I think as she slowly walks towards me dropping the script she had in hand onto the floor,"Wow...i never ...saw ..a dick before.." she said slowly as she croutched down and gazed at it."holy shit the hell is she doing" I thought as she then takes it softly into her hand as she then starts wiggling it about."hee he it's all wiggly' she said as she began to notice as it became hard and erect, "Am I turning you on bro..?"She said gazing into my softly with a smirk on her face.I slowly nod as she then pushes me onto my bed with a shove as i lay there she slowly walks towards me taking her clothes off."ooo it does doesn't?" she said playfully, She then took her shirt and bra off grabbing her boob squeezing it softly as she then began to finger her self moaning softly as she proceeded forward."Ohhh sis don't stop this is really good" I said as i began to slowly stroke my dick as it swelled into a full hardon and the tip becoming massively engorged, She then drops her pant's and panties as she then crawls onto the bed slowly. "mmm your cock is so big bro may I give it a try" she said in a cute and curious way.

part 2 will come soon so do only judge it on the story and nothing more

I only read the first sentence. It read the way pre-pubescent boys talk.

I would suggest you wait with writing erotic fiction until you have had sex (with another human being) at least once.



[This message has been edited by jackketch (edited 11-01-2006).]

I do hope this was a joke.

Aha. My quest to find the worst erotic fiction story on Totse is complete.

Actually, no. The worst one on Totse featured the phrase "I want to tear your pussy apart", about four times. Someone read it to me over the phone. My god, how I laughed.