In the face of not being really turned on by any of totse's erotica section as of current typing, I thought I would write my own to fap to.

But I'd like a little help from you guys first.

Any advice or suggestions for a plot are welcome. If I can, I'll write up one in this thread for you guys.

Thanks in advance.

girl in stages of undress at home alone. male figure rings the doorbell. fun times ahead.

i think that's a pretty fleshed out story line for erotica.

just make sure to include a lot of descriptors and adjectives and plenty of metaphors for the male organ.

quote:Originally posted by NoSkills:

girl in stages of undress at home alone. male figure rings the doorbell. fun times ahead.

i think that's a pretty fleshed out story line for erotica.

Well done on having the first post of this thread.

I prefer if it's realistic. Rather then you saw each other and boned right there. o_O

Suggestion one: Erotica is plural.

quote:Originally posted by BluryVision:

I prefer if it's realistic. Rather then you saw each other and boned right there. o_O

Realistic how?

P.S. Bump.