Here send this poem instead.........

You Look as good as buttered toast,

Your the one I like the most,

The only reason I tell you this,

Cause your the one I always miss.

Love

Fernando.

Is your girlfriend obese? Is that why she looks as good as buttered toast? I guess it's the thought that counts, the end makes me wonder if she died of high cholestoral.

It's good if you're trying to make your girl laugh at how incredibly corny you're capable of being.

Listen to 'Hotdog in a hallway' by NOFX.

Now there's a love song.

quote:Originally posted by Lazzaro:

Is your girlfriend obese? Is that why she looks as good as buttered toast? I guess it's the thought that counts, the end makes me wonder if she died of high cholestoral.

Lol. Oh yeah. That's a pretty shitty poem. Not only is it grammatically incorrect, but it's content is complete shit. Try stealing something from someone else, or just give up on the whole poem idea.