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| Sex and Affection Anything and everything about sex and relations. Please try to keep this forum on-topic, since things tend to wander a bit. Search through old topics before posting a new one, as questions get repeated a lot here. |
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#1
 2004-03-27, 20:12
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apoppyforyou 
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My erotic short story....
Well I don't have a title, but tell me how it compares to whats-his- mug's story.
"I want you to touch me," she whispered to him in the dark.
He was shaking and nervous with anticipation. He wanted her more thn he could possibly tell her. He reached out and searched for her, afraid to open his eyes. he felt his hand graze her arm.
"Not there," she said and she clasped his hand and move it slowly to her breast, "Open your eyes, and I'll take off my clothes."
He was openned them and sat on the end of the bed and watched by the light from the moon. She unbuttoned her blouse and he watched it fall to teh ground, then her skirt to her ankles. Her handsran acrooss her necka nd bosom, and she slid her panties to the ground.
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he stepped toward him, and knelt down. She kissed hima and he smelled her sweet perfume nad felt ehr long locks on he face.
She straddled him on the bed
He felt a surge through his groin, a trickling excitement in his body.
"Lie down," she said.
He did. he felt her hands running over his body, pulling off his shirt. She kissed his chest,his stomach. He felt her unbutton his pants and her lips on his groin. Excitement surged through him. God, he wanted her.
She slid his pant and boxers off of him and felt her lips on hid groin, her hands kneeding him, he clenched his fists, and tried not to move as her felt her mouth around him. His hands found the sheets underneath him and he held them, almost writhing in plesure. He felt her teeth slide down his shaft with just enough pain to make him want more.
He felt her stop and was a little worried, but he looked up and saw her crawlig to wards him. He sat up and kissed her face and neck. He lifted her up ionto him and felt himself inside her. She was wet and warm.
Now he knew she wanted him too. He felt himself grow larger inside her ans she moved upa nd down, but it wasn't fast enough.
He rolled her over onto the bed and kissed he, her face, neck, and breasts. Then he bagan to thrust into her, slowly at first, then so fast and hard her was afrad he might hurt her. He slowed when he thought of that.
"No," she breathed, "keep going."
He did so, pounding into her feircly. Ecstacy radiated from his groin, filling his body. He thought he would be spent in a moment.
Then he heard her cry out. At first he thought it was pain, then realized it was pleasure. It excited him more. Her hlegs enclosed around his back. His muscles were burning. He thrust as fast and hard as he could, until she was almost screaming.
Then she was on top of him, her body thrashing asround wildly, her hands on his chest, her nails digging into his skin.
She squeezed her knees tightly into his sides, making her tighter around him. His skin tingled. He thrust so hard she rose off the bed, and just as quicly as he was aroused he was spent, but he could tell she wasn't.
He rolled her over onto the bed again, kissing her, her neck, her chest. he nibbled lightly on her nipples and her body tensed. He watched er hand slide down between her legs.
No. He wanted to do the work. He lifted her hand to his mouth and licked it clean. In an odd way he liked the bitter taste. He kissed her stomach, her navel. His hands caressed the soft silk of her skin, her thighs, her firm bottom.
Then his lips touched the warm wet between her legs. He licked the bitter taste, penetrating her with his fingers, his tongue. Her legs twitched as eh sucked her clit, and her heard her moan.
He found himself becoming excited again. he crawled onto her and kissed her. He felt her legs widen to let him in, and he did so. This time he was slow. He wanted to feel her warmth around him. He pushed into her, her legs wrapped around him. He face was next to hers and he could feel her hot, ragged breath. Her nails raked the skin on his back. The pain was electrifying. He pushed into her harder and fster.
Then he felt her tense, her legs were rigid, and her felt her orgasm as he spurted into her.
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#2
 2004-03-27, 20:28
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Re: My erotic short story....
Whilst I clean the sperm off of my keyboard, I say that that was an exelent story, and you should submit it to the erotica section.
Oh, I like your better than the other dudes.
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#3
 2004-03-27, 20:30
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oldpervrt 
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Re: My erotic short story....
mmmm yea im cumming.
Now my turn.
Oldpervrt found a little faun by a stream. It was drinking some water, trotting in the shallows to cool off its legs from the heat the forest had been seeing the past week.
Oldpervrt crept up behind it with a log and bashed its neck. The deer fell into the stream and began to violently convulse. Wasting no time, Oldpervrt took out his now erect intruder and poked it into the little faun's rusty sheriff's badge. The convulsing of the deer due to a damaged spinal chord made its intestinal walls contract, milking Oldpervrts massive, crooked staff. Soon he was cumming jets of thick, warm, ejaculate into the belly of the faun, moaning and biting its legs as he did so.
he left the bloody cummy carcass for the wolves.
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#4
 2004-03-27, 21:44
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danhole12 
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Re: My erotic short story....
ok heres my erotic short story
emphasis on the word short
here goes:
one night your mom was about to go to sleep and she was changing when came into the room and banged her in the butt.
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#5
 2004-03-29, 01:54
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apoppyforyou 
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Re: My erotic short story....
quote:Originally posted by oldpervrt:
mmmm yea im cumming.
Now my turn.
Oldpervrt found a little faun by a stream. It was drinking some water, trotting in the shallows to cool off its legs from the heat the forest had been seeing the past week.
Oldpervrt crept up behind it with a log and bashed its neck. The deer fell into the stream and began to violently convulse. Wasting no time, Oldpervrt took out his now erect intruder and poked it into the little faun's rusty sheriff's badge. The convulsing of the deer due to a damaged spinal chord made its intestinal walls contract, milking Oldpervrts massive, crooked staff. Soon he was cumming jets of thick, warm, ejaculate into the belly of the faun, moaning and biting its legs as he did so.
he left the bloody cummy carcass for the wolves.
Hmmmm.... that was odd
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#6
 2004-03-29, 01:55
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LordJugz 
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Re: My erotic short story....
Wrong forum.
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#7
 2004-03-29, 01:55
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[th3daywalk3r] ![[th3daywalk3r] is offline](../../images/statusicon/user_offline.gif)
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Re: My erotic short story....
How can I get int othe erotica sector of totse?
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#8
 2004-03-29, 02:18
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Re: My erotic short story....
quote:Originally posted by [th3daywalk3r]:
How can I get int othe erotica sector of totse?
That's for the rest of us to know, and for you to find out
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#9
 2004-03-29, 04:42
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Re: My erotic short story....
quote:Originally posted by [th3daywalk3r]:
How can I get int othe erotica sector of totse?
its a sex and affection secret
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