There is this girl that I really like and i want to show her how i feal by a peom. So... what i am asking from you people is a good peom for this girl. BTW her name is Jeli (Anjelica). Please help I have no skills at writing poems. HELP!!

quote:Originally posted by Marco Pollo:

There is this girl that I really like and i want to show her how i feal by a peom. So... what i am asking from you people is a good peom for this girl. BTW her name is Jeli (Anjelica). Please help I have no skills at writing poems. HELP!!

If you really have no creative skills at all (which isn't the case I think) you could just google 'love poems' or so.

But please... have someone else write a poem for a girl you have a crush on? That's just silly.

--edit-- fixed some words

^_^





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Well what would be worse having someone else right a poem for me or me trying to right a peom for a girl and macking a total ass out of myself?

quote:Originally posted by Marco Pollo:

Well what would be worse having someone else right a poem for me or me trying to right a peom for a girl and macking a total ass out of myself?

Definitely the first one.

^_^

I think if you get high you can write a good poem.

O_o

Eh Hem....

Jeli

You give me a funny feeling inmy belly.



Thank you.

quote:Originally posted by punkrawkerstonershit:

Eh Hem....

Jeli

You give me a funny feeling inmy belly.



Thank you.

O jeli, you give me that tingle in my belly,

but not as much as Shelly,

I realized last nite after I fucked you,

it would be funner to go to the zoo,

And your pussy is so loose,

I'd rather fuck a goose,

or at the very least,

put it in your caboose..

Thank you, thank you

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[This message has been edited by IHateMarsians (edited 07-25-2003).]

You make me hard

You make me melt

You make me feel how the milkman felt

if My love letter to you (http://uwakimono.keenspace.com/ahmog.html) from A Heart Made of Glass doesn´t inspire you ...

quote:Originally posted by Marco Pollo:

There is this girl that I really like and i want to show her how i feal by a peom. So... what i am asking from you people is a good peom for this girl. BTW her name is Jeli (Anjelica). Please help I have no skills at writing poems. HELP!!

dude If i realy liked a girl i would atleast try to write a poem for her. not letting someone else do it for me.

quote:Originally posted by Marco Pollo:

Well what would be worse having someone else right a poem for me or me trying to right a peom for a girl and macking a total ass out of myself?

If she likes you back, and the poem comes from the heart, it doesn't matter what it's like.

if you want to show her your love through a poem, then you should write it. if we help you then we are showing our love. its not the same.

try haikus..they are relatively easy.

Shittie

Yeah, man. I agree with these actual respectful individuals here. Having soeone write a poem for you to give to your girl not only doesn't come from the heart, but it'll make you feel like a dishonest shit for doing it. Try your best, man. It's all that matters. And if she rejects it, man, then she isn't worth your effort. Just go for it. I'm backing you.

wut.do.i.gotta.do.to.get.u.n.my.arms.baby*wut.do.i .gotta.say.to.get.yer.heart*to.make.yuh.understand .how.i.need.yuh.next.to.me*gotta.get.yuh.in.my.lif e.cuz.baby. i.cant.sleep

lets see what i could do with this...

Jeli

oh jeli jeli jeli

you vagina's smelly

i wanna bend you over

and use the ky jelly.

pack some heat... so if she dont like it you can make her like it - thats how i always do it... always works

Now you ain't gotta say much cuz I was peepin you

Lookin at yo hips got me thinkin bout how deep

In you um tryin to go

You heard about No Limit Soldiers?

We get up in it and hit it harder then De La Hoya

I thought I told you soldier draws

Cover my balls, Um known for rippin the pussy walls

I heard you got that kill

I can see all in yo grill

Can you ride me like a black Mercedes?

And make me do that shit I never did with other ladies?

I got a woman so i'm not lookin for love

I just wanna fit yo glove

Get a couple of uh-uh's

Shove it in your mouth just like a thug

And uh, hit me on my pager if you want it

Its soldier passion

So get up on it if you want it WHOA-WHOA!!!!

use this this is actually part of the song "i can tell" by 507 boys (or was it 504 ?) anyway... just so i dont get sued .. i didnt write this but hey i couldve

Just write anything that comes from your heart hahaha. Even if you think it's bad she'll probably like it because at least you tried to write a poem for her.

quote:Originally posted by Marco Pollo:

There is this girl that I really like and i want to show her how i feal by a peom. So... what i am asking from you people is a good peom for this girl. BTW her name is Jeli (Anjelica). Please help I have no skills at writing poems. HELP!!

Not sure of what your after. But here is a poem of mine I quickly altered a bit..Add a few lines to the end to wrap it up if you want, The original end wouldn't cut it for you anyway. Good Luck!!

Fate has brought our hearts together,

My eyes may shift, but heart will never,

I dream at night of times spent with you,

I hope you dream the same thing too,

Cascading waterfalls and where we lie,

We just look up to see the midnight sky,

To have my chance to confide in you,

To feel an embrace and be no longer blue,

Everything we want and dream will be said,

When I rest, thoughts rush through my head,

They crash like waves and I slowly awake,

Dream of the life and memories we'll make,

My dearest Jeli I never want to be apart,

To hold you close and right near my heart,

thats a very nice poem tsunami

it really doesn't matter what the peom sounds like. the fact that youy wrote it for her will make her love it.

quote:Originally posted by punkrawkerstonershit:

Eh Hem....

Jeli

You give me a funny feeling inmy belly.



Thank you.



This one may actually be the best! She is kinda one that likes funny things like this. And short and simple is the best for this.

quote:Originally posted by Geenie:

thats a very nice poem tsunami

Thanks Geenie.

hey tsunami, could i use that poem?

if you wanna show this girl how you really feel...shouldn't YOU write the poem?!?!?!

ahhh kids...so young...so stoopid! :P

quote:Originally posted by IHateMarsians:

O jeli, you give me that tingle in my belly,

but not as much as Shelly,

I realized last nite after I fucked you,

it would be funner to go to the zoo,

And your pussy is so loose,

I'd rather fuck a goose,

or at the very least,

put it in your caboose..

Thank you, thank you

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[This message has been edited by IHateMarsians (edited 07-25-2003).]

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLO LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

PLEASE do not write her a poem. It is over done and sickly sweet.

go to www.lovingyou.com (http://www.lovingyou.com) - plenty of cheesy love poems for you to rip off

Kriminal I like your poem. Very nice.



-Jeli-

-Do-

-Me-

-And-

-I'll-

-Do-

-You-

-Back-

-Cuz-

-I-

-Love-

-You-