here are two peoms i wrote tell me what you think: good bad??? and if you have any suggestions to make them any better.

HELP
i can't seem to get up an ivisible rope keeps me tied to the chair. I fear that i have not enough strength to break my binding so i lay back and enjoy. My only sorrow is that i live not my life day by day but live for the chair that holds the power to keep me down.

LIFE
As i walk through the forest of the unknown i find my self enveloped in a thick mist. it clings to me like a new skin. Like life itself
i walk blindly not knowing what to except. Not knowing where to go. I feel myself being pulled in two directions, one i welcone with opened hands for i feel calm and relaxedand utterly at peace, theother sends shivers down my spine, an eveil to greatto call it evil is like callind a lion a mere kitty cat. At different times the pukks are stronger. after what seems like a life time immerge to find santuary. a harmonyous place. I knew if i gave into the evil i wouldn't have ended up here but a plca i dare not to think of. as i walked to the river i knew i was going to be safe. Forever.

Stanzas? Your poems seem sort of formless.

Yeah, I didn't know when to take a breath!

*winded*