blimble slime
unrolls in time
and folds this rhyme
up with the grime.

whatwherewhy
the burning sky
begins to try
to scorch my eye

tis blazing seething
wandering leading
thoughts from meaning
touch from feeling.

stop
hop
to the top
brave the chop

learn your mind
let thoughts unwind
leave body behind
let eyes go blind.

you complete dumbass. It's supposed to be BAD poetry. shameshame. Nice poem by the way. Very... inspiring. right.

lol... thanks?

i know, but there's no other poetry forums that I saw, so i figured the fucked up content of this one might make up for its logical rhymescheme.