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Eat your words This forum, formerly known as Vogon poetry, has now been expanded to include all forums of literary creative expression. Please post ONLY your own work and try not to flame other users. Bad vogonesque poetry, is of course, still welcome here.

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Old 2002-07-12, 00:20
MaTrIXSpiirit MaTrIXSpiirit is offline
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Dark Fire burning inside,
Depresing Evil waiting outside.
Dangerous Death ready to fight,
But with faith I increase my light.
The long bloody sword....

Help continue/finish this pooem

-MaTrIXSpiirit-

[This message has been edited by MaTrIXSpiirit (edited 07-12-2002).]
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Old 2002-07-13, 04:00
Dr Know Dr Know is offline
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no thanks

keep trying though
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Old 2002-07-17, 05:08
MaTrIXSpiirit MaTrIXSpiirit is offline
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The long bloody blade pierces my soul,
but my power continues to unfold,
Bright lightning flashes,
while his body turns to ashes.

How about that? I don't know I'm out.

[This message has been edited by MaTrIXSpiirit (edited 07-17-2002).]
 
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