it isnt vogan poetry but this is the best place. what do you think? does it suck? is it ok? let me know what you think of it




i gaze across the ball room
and see the maiden in red
laden in jewels as if god sent
the lights dance about the floor
as i reminisce of times before
slowly i make my aproach
with my alias always close
the jewels sparkle with grand brilliance
never fading with great resilliances
her face is like a ray brighter than the sun
as i serenade thy heavens with mighty tounge
the gown curves with celestial elegance
as the band of suiters fall in to a deep trance
infatuated with the poise and grace
of the maidens dress and cheerfull face
i break free with moments to spare
as i see her shimering hair
walking slowly twords my band
all aproach, boy and man
slowly she raises her gracefull hand
and speaks to me as only angels can
at that moment i feel unsure
as i hear the thud of my locker door
the ball was but a daydream
of finer days before

nope.

she raised her fist
i broke her arm
you really don't need to know why

she smiled alot
and gave me a wink
you really don't know why

she said she cared
she looked at the floor
i really don't know why

she said she was a virgin
i started to laugh
you really don't know why

she gave me a wink
she said she cared
you really don't know why