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Eat your words This forum, formerly known as Vogon poetry, has now been expanded to include all forums of literary creative expression. Please post ONLY your own work and try not to flame other users. Bad vogonesque poetry, is of course, still welcome here.

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Old 2001-11-26, 21:15
emerikan emerikan is offline
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she was running thru the leaves after i pushed
running for his eyes to sparkle like they did
so prettily when he cried
viscous fluid seeping under the leaves
slippery things that she slipped on
scraping skin off of her palms
wincing as her blood ran thru muck and sucked on noisely
knees stinging probably leaking too she thought
but she continued to rush as i was crying afraid she might miss me like last time
coating in honey with decaying insides
breath so sugary sweet broke me down
like worm eaten wood
blowing away my lung
corrupted flesh dancing with soft spongy insubstantiality
and he was falling without a hand hold
and she knew it so she came to watch
giggling in complacent filth
pointing and laughing
gorged and continued feeding on my ruined compassion
i slowly faded as duality grew in
below ground watching her grow still as i felt myself fluttering
deep down inside
i felt her slip smear and the sudden sting on palm and knee
i felt it inside as i absorbed in
so debased i shuddered open mouth gaping in shock as it rolled thru me filthy flood consuming
i retch bile taste on my teeth
as i licked and spat

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lets go for a walk, and paint the stars in constellations of cruelty
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Old 2001-11-27, 11:51
Mega-Volt Mega-Volt is offline
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I like your style.

It is shamefull and ditgusting to be human.
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Old 2001-11-27, 23:12
emerikan emerikan is offline
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Default Re: autumn

thats strange that you say that, d'ya mind if i ask why you replied with that?

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lets go for a walk, and paint the stars in constellations of cruelty
 
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