NO CRAP!!!!, only decent poems either yours or borrowed, if its good and u want some opinions ill give u one.

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~*M�k�v��*~

In my soul there is a world were chaos and hell run wild
In my heart, there is a life were my veins run with sin.
In my mind there is an empty space were the plots of my evil deeds float around.
In my body there is a little girl who's only danger and only fear is herself, cuz in my world we are all damned.
And along the streets of my hell we walk in a river of blood, My world is only an example of the simple fact that we will never live in peace cause the day of my birth upon
this peaceful heart of mine, I slayed this sword of sin.
That day was the begging of all chaos in my world.
my world shall forever live in vain, as I said my friend in my world we are all damned in the end.




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~*M�k�v��*~

Your fragile eggshell mind becomes overwhelmed
You cannot comprehend, you only wish to pretend,
Pretend that you know me
Pretend that you love me
Getting caught up in myself starts to bore me!!!
And yet I continue.
For peace
For serenity
For the love that I cannot find
I couldn�t get it even if i tried
............FUCK IT IM DEAD



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~*M�k�v��*~

i am eating sausage
thinking makavelian poetry sucks
AAAUUGHHH!!!! there is a spider on me
i am drunk beyond comprehension
they are bavarian sausages

oh fuck it guys here comes one of my "creations" while i was filled with hate..oh duhh i know its bad, but fuck yall i like it.
ill kill you!
Look its dark outside. the clock strikes 12. you gotta die. ill kill you, i might.
OH! run, run away, run outside into the night. Dont look back, ill kill you, i might.
Look at me; i got a knife, im armed and willing, to take from you your life. Sucker you run all you can, but cant you see theres no way out, no one here, just you and me? Ooh yeah have fear cos im so damn near. Im gonna kill you, take your life from you.
HAHA! im getting nearer. So many ways to kill you, i gotta choose one, cos theres only one you.
UUH AAH i cut your arm, oh it hurts, im not sorry dont worry itll all ba over soon.
Look at me; i got a gun! im gonna shoot you right in the head. im spycho? yeah! but youre dead! *BAMM*.
Ooh what glory ,your finaly dead!
Oh now its my turn ro bleed.
See this gun? ill point it to my head *BAMMM* and im dead.

dont come and piss me off, keep ur bad opinion to urself and stick it where the sun dont shine!
bye!

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i saw that!

i think that watching a tv program were their cutting some fucker open is pretty amusing while ur enjoiying ur dinner.

Not Again, Hey Evil Mastermind could you do you thang again here.

~Kameron
Just to tell you we can now expect to see posts titled Serious Generalities and Love & Affection in the afor mentioned forums.

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~Kameron
Carpe Aptenodytes! (Seize the Penguins!)

ok i got like a ton of bad bad home made poetry here some ehh oki

I�ll take it to the street in a heartbeat
Fetch me up with a knife or a gun
I�ll let you have your fun
I said goodbye to the sun
And hello to the moon
The full moon
Street kid with no shoes
Neon shades of orange and blue
Living by words like despite and making it through
Endless night
Endless seas of fake light
A dead body in a Dumpster
In the back of a dark ally
Shot with a gun
Killed by a life one the run
No sun
A baby not even a year
Mourning sick with the cancer
Killed by drugs and police slugs
Justice of society
Gives peace to the majority
Flip side no lies
No ties
Dogs cruising high as the skies
Mad from decease
Looking for relives
Leafs of autumn
20 years old
Autumn of life comes soon to my generation
Fast like bullet penetration
No good intentions
A generation with a life sentence
Drugs and alcohol it�s the only parole

Lupus

that waz good

u have really expressed your thoughts on teen life and its hardships
thank you for that reply

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ehh thanks
heres another one handed this one over in a english esay thing about grades quess what my teacher the b.... hated it

Educational stupidity

Hey little miss teacher
Look me in the eyes
Your suppose to be so wise
Tell me lies
Society�s disguise
Leaves its children blind
Besiege every mind
Erase every sign
Tell me tales of freedom
While you put my mind in chains
Educate me until I know
How to adapt
How to keep the flow
How to keep my mind slow
Put a number one insanity
Count the alcohol
Give me right and wrong
Black and white
No insight
Judge my life
Give me a grade one paper
A prayer and a preacher
A God I can obey

im not much into grades i quess
think it's a stupid way to judge people

Lupus

my Thang.. sorry its coming so late, i dont usually check this forum

My Thang

My thang is so large
its always in charge
i use it in traffic
as a sort of land barge

my thang gets in trouble
(being bigger than Hubble)
all my jeans are too tight
and buildings are rubble

my thang likes to drink
from a beer, to the sink
but I like Corona,
too bad it dont think

it makes all the news
leaves detectives clues
sometimes i think
and give myself the blues

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WHY MUST YOU TORMENT ME SO!!!

The End

i have poetry...i wrote it myself..i'm being asked to be published in a collection of books...but if i post it...well..it's really sappy..has alot of personal input and meaning...well..if you want to see it..here it is:

The Begginning To The End
The new life;
born and clean to the world.
The babe, raises his arms
to the graceful sky
and the love flows through, like great rivers of time.

Through the length of time
the body, ages and time shows its wear.
The skin; from dusk till dawn
transforms from baby soft, to a tough leather.

Death has come upon this child,
and his life has been remembered.
Now we put his name to rest
and keep him in our heart.

Laurence Micheal Babey
Copyright �2001 Laurence Babey

whatdya think?

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I liked it, it's got style!

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