I wrote this all of a sudden, it's not exactly Vogon (some of you might think so), but I wanted to get some opinions on it.


Last night, I dreamt I was a god,
Holding creation in my palm.
The night before, I dreamt I was a devil,
The bane and scourge of all that is love.

Last night, I dreamt I was the sun,
Giving life to all the Earth.
The night before, I dreamt I was the moon,
Mysterious and cold, rider of the night,

Last night, I dreamt I was your lover,
The one who brings you comfort.
The night before, I dreamt I was your killer,
Bringing pain and loss of feeling.

Last night, I dreamt I was the brush,
Creating without limits.
The night before, I dreamt I was the blade,
Destroying without conscience.

This night, I'll dream I am myself,
The lover and the fighter.
Tomorrow night, I'll dream of nothingness,
For nothing lasts forever.

Frozen peas taste better than canned peas.

Yes, oh yes, they're even better frozen!!

-Orson Welles

Gravehead, that "all of a sudden stuff" is cool, kinda like you're writing it for someone else.

Happened to me a couple of times.

I like yours especially how the end piece twirls~

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all of a sudden stuff is good

but i just dont like that kind of poetry...

sorry.

oh and i am afraid that canned peas taste better then fresh or frozen. even if they where fresh when they where frozen, not sure about frozen canned peas though, never tried those.

"People dont chew their peas, they swallow them whole to avoid the peay goodness....or at least, they should."

- Mahwahcoo

Mach ten guys!

The poem was actually pretty good, though not very Vogonish. As for the peas debate, I can't offer an opinion. That's one veggie I don't eat.

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Originally posted by Mr.Stealth:
[B]all of a sudden stuff is good

oh and i am afraid that canned peas taste better then fresh or frozen.

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peas in a pod case
sweetest taste of early sun
frozen not a one


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Poetry has to rhyme. And Benjamin Franklin invented electricity dammit!!!!!

Nice. Fuck that, it was very good and thought provoking.

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Remember the golden rule:
Those with the gold make the rules.

canned peas....*drools*

what the hell is with the peas? Nice but a little odd poem.

I'll tell you what's up with the peas...frozen geen peas are the best! Every can is filled with frozen goodness and green peaness.

GREEN PENIS?

Working always for the cause of whirled peas.

Peas out!

Benjamin Franklin invented electricity?? Ahh, the 'murican educational system would bring tears to my eyes, if i gave a damn.

Breakdown? What Breakdown?

As the tears stream down my face
I wonder what they mean
Are they emotions out of place
Or liquid shattered dreams

Turns out they were emotions outta place dreams die hard, especially inside a hard head!

Plan B = 2x4