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Vogon Poetry - The Worst in The Universe Vogon Poetry is by far the worst in the universe. This forum includes all forms of literary creative expression. Please post ONLY your own work and try not to flame other users. Bad vogonesque poetry, is of course, still welcome here.

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Old 2009-01-08, 20:42
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Fucking Bikini Bottom.
Default The Ripper.

The Ripper

The continued silencing of their screams has trained my eyes to rest open.
These screams have become routine in my slumber.
Each scream etches a memory in my mind.
These howls dress my body with a scent of butchery.
I have grown accustomed to the pools of blood on the cobblestone streets.

I feel him in my veins.
I am his kin.
And those screams have become mine.
Their blood has too become my satisfaction.
My escape into utter bliss.
His assassinations become my permanent grin.
His genius has provided me with a new ability.
His evil has provided me a blueprint.

The silhouette in the alley curves towards my lurking eye.
Only to notice a glimpse of his skin in the streetlight.
Standing in the shadows is my defined personality.
With crack of his cape comes a bloody breeze.
And his fiery eye has caught mine.

His homicidal maniac has turned on me.
Considering his mercy is lent to no one.
And my potential has been slain.
The bloody cobblestones have a river of my blood to be swabbed.
But my dying wish has been answered.
To see the midnight blue of the European night sky provide a backdrop to my only father.
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Old 2009-01-09, 08:54
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Behind you. With a lead pipe.
Default Re: The Ripper.

The flow was a little off for my liking but otherwise highly enjoyable. Nice use of language. Very vivid imagery.
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Old 2009-01-10, 22:03
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New Bedford, MA
Default Re: The Ripper.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Toothlessjoe
The flow was a little off for my liking but otherwise highly enjoyable. Nice use of language. Very vivid imagery.


what Toothless said.
 
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