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| Vogon Poetry - The Worst in The Universe Vogon Poetry is by far the worst in the universe. This forum includes all forms of literary creative expression. Please post ONLY your own work and try not to flame other users. Bad vogonesque poetry, is of course, still welcome here. |
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#1
 2009-01-07, 19:48
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New Arrival
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MushRoom Mountain_/^\/^\ /^\_
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Dark Poetry
Tic tic tic here we go again alone in my room I sit surrounded by sin.
666 time to feed the demons once again...amphetamine's take my soul amen.
Incenerate my urn in front of everyone I wish to leave nothing just as I come.
I'm haunted and psychotic my gardian angel turned demonic and tryed to strangle me with it's halo.
But this ain't xbox I grabbed him by the wings and ripped his head off like microsoft meet firefox.
I'v upgraded by being degraded I no longer need love I have self hatred.
Only the real no more fakeness suddenly everything seems so dark and tainted.
Colors are dull and faded I spilled bleach on my soul and it evaporated.
Every line I type is another kick in the teeth.
I'll stay in my shell like a sword in it's sheath and still cut bone deep.
My words are sharp enough to give you paper cut from this computer screen.
Talk is cheap and most people are sheep they only follow when you lead and fall apart when you leave.
Writers and poets please vist my blog!
http://bloodypoetshynes.blogspot.com/
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#2
 2009-01-07, 20:22
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Re: Dark Poetry
amazing. very good flow. its like evey line hits home. i can imagine it being a very good song :D
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#3
 2009-01-08, 04:24
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Pringles 
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Re: Dark Poetry
My words are sharp enough to give you paper cut from this computer screen.
Thats my favorite line. Very fuckin good job.;)
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#4
 2009-01-08, 05:49
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New Arrival
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MushRoom Mountain_/^\/^\ /^\_
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Re: Dark Poetry
Thats my favorite line. Very fuckin good job.;)Thank you so much your comment gives me inspiration
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#5
 2009-01-08, 06:01
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New Arrival
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MushRoom Mountain_/^\/^\ /^\_
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Re: Dark Poetry
amazing. very good flow. its like evey line hits home. i can imagine it being a very good song :Dthanks alot my writing is often misunderstood and thats one of my writings that really means something to me I can't belive people like it...I wish nothing but the best to you Anarchist88
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#6
 2009-01-09, 01:04
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Re: Dark Poetry
thanks alot my writing is often misunderstood and thats one of my writings that really means something to me I can't belive people like it...I wish nothing but the best to you Anarchist88
and the same to you sir. it just seems like you poured a lot of emotions and views into the piece. thatswhat im trying to do. i can rhyme/write anything i want to, but i might not feel it inside :( is all of your poetry dark, or is this it
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#7
 2009-01-09, 04:47
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RobinHood 
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Re: Dark Poetry
Hey man, that is some heavy shit....
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