When I had that dream,
Nobody listened to what it was about.
When I let out that scream,
No one even heard my shout.
The only thing that listens to me is in my head,
My heart has bled; it might be dead.
The shadows will follow me forevermore.
No one took heed of what I said.
I walk with the moon on the silent shore.
From the norm my mind has fled.

^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v ^v^v^v^v^v

Comments and criticism are enouraged

Were you on acid at the time you wrote it. Thats an ok poem.:)

I had a dream recently about the moon. I was walking with my family through this creepy-life forest that made you feel both safe and insecure. I got to the waters of the sea, even though I was looking for a lake. I saw the reflection of the full moon in the water and I knew. I looked up to the moon.. and then I woke up.


Then 45 minutes later I went out to see the moon, and it was full. And I was like. Alright.

But you know regarding your poem as long as you can go swimming beach-volleyball will be on your side.

I\ But you know regarding your poem as long as you can go swimming beach-volleyball will be on your side.

huh?

It's great :)

huh?

It's deceivingly simple, my apologies.

It involves volleying beaches.

It's deceivingly simple, my apologies.

It involves volleying beaches.

your posts are always amusingly confusing :)

your posts are always amusingly confusing :)
Heh! I find them quite entertaining.
____________________
Liked your poem Anarchist! 5char

Heh! I find them quite entertaining.
____________________
Liked your poem Anarchist! 5char

yeah, me too
-------------------------------
and thanks :)

i wish :'/

By myself but not alone....... schizophrenic?