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Vogon Poetry - The Worst in The Universe Vogon Poetry is by far the worst in the universe. This forum includes all forms of literary creative expression. Please post ONLY your own work and try not to flame other users. Bad vogonesque poetry, is of course, still welcome here.

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Old 2008-12-17, 01:06
RobinHood RobinHood is offline
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Default She is the one.

When I look into her eyes
My dick starts to rise
When our lips meet
It is so sweet
As our tongues introduce
I feel as if I must reproduce
My hand touches her supple breast
It is much smoother than the rest
As my lips move down her body
She can tell I am somebody
I kiss her lovely cunt without haste
Slow down,we have time to waste
My tongue gets tired and jaw tight
The pussy is hot and just right
My dick is throbbing with desire
And my balls are on fire
I slowly enter her vagina
Nothing in the world is finer
Her pussy gets tight
Then I know the time is right
We get into the fucking mode
Our orgasms explode
As we gasp for air
and I stroke her hair
I can tell you something
This aint no fling
Cause this lady is the one..


This is the first poem I've ever written so I would appreciate your flames low level...I came here to read poems not to write one..I dont know what got into me....Yesterdays wine I guess...
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Old 2008-12-17, 02:19
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Shangri-La
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Give this man a Pulitzer.
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Old 2008-12-17, 03:07
Pringles Pringles is offline
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OMG that it is one of the best poems i haver ever read! Not even kidding! You sir need to publish this! You shall win many medals. :)
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Old 2008-12-17, 03:16
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Fucking Bikini Bottom.
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awesome
 #5 
Old 2008-12-18, 01:40
RobinHood RobinHood is offline
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Thanks for the good reviews ...I thought it was ok for a novice...This could be a new avenue for me...
 
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