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Vogon Poetry - The Worst in The Universe Vogon Poetry is by far the worst in the universe. This forum includes all forms of literary creative expression. Please post ONLY your own work and try not to flame other users. Bad vogonesque poetry, is of course, still welcome here.

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Old 2008-11-23, 16:31
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Default Cmok Godzina - Kiss Time

I need our kiss time baby,
In your presence I'm feeling hazey
I need your tender lips: to drive me crazy.
And maybe, with a litte bit of loving
I'll be on top of my game -
Fully bloated ego ready to drive you insane:
In passion; floating; under your gaze;
Lost in our music in this emotional maze.

Oh bedtime baby, together we lay.
Lost in a labyrinth of love and duvets -
In your arms I'm floating, somewhere in space.
Until your gravity draws me back close to your face.
And on your lips I plant, the fruits from eden;
Under your heavy breathing, I can feel your heart beating.
We're running away - through all the seasons,
From Spring to Autumn, defying all reason.
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Old 2008-11-23, 19:49
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Default Re: Cmok Godzina - Kiss Time

I think this would work great as a song if not considered one already. I think you should consider making into one. Are you a singer?
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Old 2008-11-24, 13:57
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Default Re: Cmok Godzina - Kiss Time

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Originally Posted by Corrupt_Nerd
I think this would work great as a song if not considered one already. I think you should consider making into one. Are you a singer?


Haha, well spotted. I actualy wrote it as a song, but just decided to post it here anyway.

If you know the group 'Massive Attack' (Intertia Creeps (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zZB4B5Wdcis)) then it'd probably be so much easier to imagine how I want the song to sound. Both verses not really sung but kind of spoken/rapped. Then the chorus sung:

"And today we pray
That tomorrow will be the same
Our fire will remain
And will never fade away"
 
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