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Vogon Poetry - The Worst in The Universe Vogon Poetry is by far the worst in the universe. This forum includes all forms of literary creative expression. Please post ONLY your own work and try not to flame other users. Bad vogonesque poetry, is of course, still welcome here.

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Old 2008-11-23, 00:55
Nohan Nohan is offline
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Default Disassociate

Let me get away.
Let me put my soul in this box,
And send it to the reincarnate.

I can't handle this burden.
I must disconnect myself from all these words.
These images seem to burn.
Every thought with a double meaning.
My dirty mind requires cleaning.

Help me but I won't accept it.
If you criticize I will reject it.
I cannot seem to get away.
Yet at the same time I need to stray,
From the abstract conception of my creation.
I'll delude myself in this elation.

I'm pushing on a revelation.
Or am I just ignoring patience.

Please.. I ask myself.. To fade..
So I can understand, my thoughts..
Today..

Peace of mind.. In a sound..
Please, where is my true self?
Above or underground..

Now the flow changes..
My state of mind rearranges.

Breaking away from the definition.
Disassociated from my reality..

Come and stay a while..
Because I'm leaving this mess..

I'm content because there's no surface any more.
I won't give myself away to any whore.
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Old 2008-11-23, 20:04
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Default Re: Disassociate

I think this sounds perfect. It's one of those poems that just sounds like its been written with so much conviction. It sounds deep and I like the way it flows.
 
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