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| Vogon Poetry - The Worst in The Universe Vogon Poetry is by far the worst in the universe. This forum includes all forms of literary creative expression. Please post ONLY your own work and try not to flame other users. Bad vogonesque poetry, is of course, still welcome here. |
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#1
 2008-11-20, 17:41
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Behind you. With a lead pipe.
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Something More.
I have researched your name over the past
few years and I do not regret to say
that you are non-existent.
I'm lying, of course.
I would have hoped that
somewhere in the world
someone with your name
would have built this
reputation
on the life-expectancy of lab rats
or perhaps a practical approach to
raising an autistic child
something, something, something
to know
you were more
than what
I had.
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#2
 2008-11-22, 13:19
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Moderator
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Fairfax, Virginia, America
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Re: Something More.
Your work grows more punchy and taut with each distillation. I enjoy you most when you feel confident enough to give a short, simple, direct statement. It really feels like your pieces "earn" those moments.
"I'm lying, of course" is probably my favorite line from you so far. I love how it works here.
This whole thing makes me excited to see what your next one may be.
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#3
 2008-11-23, 10:24
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Regular
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Behind you. With a lead pipe.
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Re: Something More.
Luckily for you this is merely part 1. I'm working on a second part as we speak. Probably be up later or in the next few days.
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