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Vogon Poetry - The Worst in The Universe Vogon Poetry is by far the worst in the universe. This forum includes all forms of literary creative expression. Please post ONLY your own work and try not to flame other users. Bad vogonesque poetry, is of course, still welcome here.

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Old 2008-11-20, 17:41
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Behind you. With a lead pipe.
Default Something More.

I have researched your name over the past
few years and I do not regret to say

that you are non-existent.

I'm lying, of course.

I would have hoped that
somewhere in the world
someone with your name
would have built this

reputation

on the life-expectancy of lab rats
or perhaps a practical approach to

raising an autistic child

something, something, something
to know

you were more
than what

I had.
 #2 
Old 2008-11-22, 13:19
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Fairfax, Virginia, America
Default Re: Something More.

Your work grows more punchy and taut with each distillation. I enjoy you most when you feel confident enough to give a short, simple, direct statement. It really feels like your pieces "earn" those moments.

"I'm lying, of course" is probably my favorite line from you so far. I love how it works here.

This whole thing makes me excited to see what your next one may be.
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Old 2008-11-23, 10:24
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Behind you. With a lead pipe.
Default Re: Something More.

Luckily for you this is merely part 1. I'm working on a second part as we speak. Probably be up later or in the next few days.
 
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