Ode to Obama


Watermelon in one hand
KFC in the other
Bling bling on your chest
Bad ideas in your head
Changing US for the worse
Withdrawing your troops from Iraq
Diminishing oil profits by half
I still can't believe, a nig' was elected prezadent
Allah may be praised
Your salary may be raised
Your personality may have changed
But you'll always be that nigger boy from Hawaii


I do admire your courage and persistence
Which is the gist of human existence
Not many of your race have the guts
To get to where you now stand
It seems to me, that finally
Niggers may start to aim higher
And stop being lazy asses
It is a worthy goal
So I wish you luck to all


A little poem I wrote about Barack Obama.
Please help me improve it. I'm a newb at poetry.

You should be more poetic

Be more specific, please.

Be more specific, please.

More


Less :p


Some :D is also called for


;) Are also aspects of this

George Bush is the white cowboy chimp he will replace,
When Obama's president, I hope he kicks Bush in the face.

this is a rhyming couplet lol
something something rhymes with lol