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| Vogon Poetry - The Worst in The Universe Vogon Poetry is by far the worst in the universe. This forum includes all forms of literary creative expression. Please post ONLY your own work and try not to flame other users. Bad vogonesque poetry, is of course, still welcome here. |
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#1
 2008-10-31, 13:48 |
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Questions objections obtuse
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 Nursery Lucidity
This kind of has to be sung for effect.
Unequivocal divisible
Inquisitive and quizzical
Where are you from?
Trivial relivial
The so sequestered physical
Where am I from?
Experimental dogma fable
Scientific ration tables
Where did we form?
Spontaneously compulsive walls
Obstructed and produced with longs
Where did he go?
Burn the paper read the news
Who said I was being shrewd?
Here, here I'm not.
Screaming loudly they aren't heard
For they make noise that seems absurd
Your, you're a freak.
On and on can go this song
But here it ends for I am drawn
Hi, hi to you.
The thing that bothers me most is the last line
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#2
2008-10-31, 13:56 |
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Re: Nursery Lucidity
pure meth motivated ramble
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#3
2008-10-31, 21:21 |
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Re: Nursery Lucidity
jazzy and fresh. The only problem is the last three lines, they end too abruptly after the previous stanza set up a nice follow on.
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#4
2008-11-01, 14:26 |
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Trollism is a social construct
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Re: Nursery Lucidity
pure meth motivated ramble
by meth did you mean meth-amphetamine or meth-ematician ?  |
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Nursery Lucidity